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Harry Potter and the Dark Lord Galby Harry, Ron and Hermione go to Alagaesia. By Greeny and Gonff. C2 Rate Topic: ****- 5 Votes

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Posted 09 June 2007 - 10:45 PM

"Awesome, mate! This time do it with your broom," Ron said. Harry had been demonstrating that he could apparate in increasingly random situations.

"Don't forget your wand," Ron added.

"Come on guys, I have apparated before," Harry said back to his friends.

Hermione smiled, “You haven’t with a broom, it’s different, and much harder.”

Harry nodded, excepting the fact. Slowly, as he gathered himself and imagined being on the other side of the room with his broom (and his wand), a thought came unbidden to his head. It was of a book he had read over the summer at the Dursley’s, on one of his cousin's untouched shelves. The book was called Eragon and it’s sequel Eldest.

His mind leaped to the end of the sequel where the hero, Eragon had discovered he was the son of one of the major villains. Harry felt the tightening of his limbs and found it hard to breath. He could tell, as the feelings stopped, that nothing would ever be the same . . .

As he opened his eyes and looked around, he knew that he was definitely not in the kitchen anymore. In front of him was a group of unfamiliar people, which isn't a bad thing, if you're a nobody, but if you're name is Harry James Potter, life just isn't so simple.

One by one he recognized the characters. A beautiful lady with pointed ears that he decided must be Arya. A short, gruff looking man who could only be Orik. Harry looked around the circle, matching each person to a description. He turned, hoping to find an exit, but instead saw a sapphire dragon head. Looking back to the meeting he said softly, “Um...Hi.”

“Who are you?” the man who we hoped was not Eragon asked suspiciously, “and why are you carrying a broom?”
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Back in Harry’s own world Ron and Hermione searched frantically for him, calling his name and checking all the rooms in the house.

“Wait,” Hermione said, “Why don’t you go and apparate next to him? He probably just went outside to fly.”

“Still afraid of your broom Hermione,” she scowled at Ron’s teasing, “Whatever, I’ll go, someone needs to.”

“I would go but I don’t have a broom.”

“You can use my old one.”

She nodded, not finding another excuse. They pair walked to the brooms and each grabbed one.

“Alright, on the count of three,” Hermione said nervously, “one, two, three.”

The sickening feeling washed over them as they apparated to beside Harry but they had no idea what they were getting themselves into.
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Please note that only me and Gonff will be posting this story, it is not open. And we know the time line isn't right, sorry. Otherwise, do you like it?

This post has been edited by greeny: 07 February 2009 - 01:29 AM

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Posted 10 June 2007 - 10:29 AM

Here is my post. Hope it is good.

"I am Harry Potter. And this is more than a broom..... it flies." the young man answered. His hair being caught in the wind blew wildly as it revealed an odd shaped scar on his forehead. "And who are you?" Harry questioned back.

"I am Eragon Shadeslayer, and this is my faithful companion, Saphira." Saphira grumbled, affirming this statement.

An alarmed look showed on Eragon's face as two more of the mysterious people appeared right before his eyes. He took a step back, not knowing what else to do.

Saphira.
he said, calling to her in his mind.
Yes Eragon? she replied. Her voice showed that she too was dumbfounded by the image. What is going on? he asked. How am I supposed to know? Saphira replied. You're the dragon, aren't you supposed to be wise?

As Eragon and Saphira kept up the arguement, the three mysterious teenagers watched as the many expressions crossed Eragon's face. The look of wonder showed that they had no idea what was going on.

"ERAGON!" Arya yelled, to get his attention. The two stopped arguing as Eragon looked around Saphira's larger shoulder, to answer Arya's call.

"Yes?" he answered, with an affronted look on his face. Arya signaled to the onlookers, and Eragon once again turned to face the newly arrived guests. "I am sorry" he said. This is Arya Drottingu (sp?), Princess of Elesmera.

"We know" the three said at once.
"What?" was Eragon's reply. Now he was the one with the look of wonder upon him.

That was it.... for now....muahahaha.... sorry. rofl.gif

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Posted 11 June 2007 - 11:46 AM

That's cool. It's a good idea. Keep going!
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Posted 11 June 2007 - 02:34 PM

Salamon!! Someone else likes Gatomon's digivolutions except me!! Love your avvy, Wikkid X!!

This story is very good. Keep it up!
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Posted 16 June 2007 - 01:15 PM

Wow this is good. I hope you keep posting.

If you don't I'll endlessly bother you with PMs. ( does that sentence even make sense???)
Smile... it confuses people
I have have dragon called Sil'lana, who is roughly the same colour as this text.
I also have one called Pinky.
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Posted 16 June 2007 - 02:23 PM

QUOTE(Saphira~Gal @ Jun 16 2007, 02:15 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Wow this is good. I hope you keep posting.

If you don't I'll endlessly bother you with PMs. ( does that sentence even make sense???)


This is a neat idea, but I think that Voldemort should apparate to Alagaesia too, maybe meet Galby while he's at it yes.gif
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Posted 16 June 2007 - 05:25 PM

Sorry I haven't posted but I had it done and then I turned off my computer. Of course I also stupidly forgot to save it. Sorry.
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Posted 17 June 2007 - 03:14 PM

\update!!!!!!
I'll be waiting for you, Arthryn-chan. ;_; ~ Tekcub

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Posted 18 June 2007 - 10:07 AM

Your wish is my command.

"Wait," Harry said as he pulled his friends into a huddle, "how do you guys know about this?"

"I got the books for Fred and George's birthday presents. They find muggle fantasy books great jokes, and who wouldn't. I mean really, they use magic without wands. How do you know about them?"

"My parents got them for me over the summer," Hermione said, "They said it was because they had magic in them, but it kind of gets boring after the third or fourth time reading it."

The boys goggled as Hermione explained. Thinking about why she would read such a book more than once.

"And Harry," she continued, "where exactly did you find them?"

"I found them on one of Dudley's shelves, I had nothing better to do, so I read them." he stated quickly.

"Harry, do you know where exactly in the book we are?" Hermione asked.

"Um, well, since Roran isn't here I would expect it to be right before the final battle."

Right then Eragon coughed, bringing the trio back to him. They turned around and tried to put up the mental barriers they had read about, knowing it was likely he would try to break into there minds.

"So," he said, "how do you know who I am?"

"Um... You wouldn't understand. It's complicated." the three mumbled.

You found us in a book. Saphira interrupted.

"Hey, you broke into are minds!" yelled Ron.

It was necessary. Besides, since you know the story, will you help us. We need more magicians... I mean wizards.

"Yes, we'll help, Saphira, or should I say, Ms. Mind-Reading-Dragon" said Harry.

As he was answering a messenger ran in saying that Nasuada needed Eragon, Saphira and Arya. As the three left Saphira said, Come with us, Nasuada will need to meet you sometime, so why not do it now?

"Fine," they said and headed out of the tent with the others.

This post has been edited by greeny: 19 December 2008 - 11:51 PM

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The Wicked Witch of the West (Elphaba), Shrek, The Grinch, The Incredible Hulk, The Green Egg, Dobby, The Basilisk in The Chamber of Secrets.

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Posted 18 June 2007 - 04:51 PM

NICE!!!! YAY!!! KEEP IT UP!!!
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Posted 19 June 2007 - 01:44 AM

YAY! Another update!
Smile... it confuses people
I have have dragon called Sil'lana, who is roughly the same colour as this text.
I also have one called Pinky.
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Posted 19 June 2007 - 01:51 AM

Sweet...haha this could be hilarious...

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Posted 20 June 2007 - 07:37 AM

Haha! It's awesome! I love it! thumbsup.gif Good writing skills you two have there!

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Posted 21 June 2007 - 04:30 PM

Sorry for the wait, and thank you Murphia.^^


...The six of them strode into the daylight. The sun shone out brightly as they shuffled through the vast amounts of soldiers, and Urgals, until they reached the dark shadow streaming from the tent of Lady Nasuada. The thin rope securing her tent from intruders had been un-done by Eragon, and opened for the guests to be let in.

"You first." insisted Ron to Hermoine.

"Ladies first." she replied back. Arya stiffled a laugh, but soon returned to her usual, normal self, as Harry offered to go.

As soon as they were all in the tent, Eragon cleared his throat.

"You called for us, Lady Nasuada?" Nasuada turned from conversing with one of her Varden soldiers, and spoke.

"Yes Erag-." she began, but stopped after seeing the rather large crowd.

"These are our guests..... They are wizards."

Nasuada looked puzzled. "Like a magician, they do magic. They have agreed to help us." said Eragon.

"You know, you could at least straighten it up in here." piped Hermoine.

"Well, I am sorry that I have neglected my cleaning duties, and would rather help save our land from Galbatorix." Nasuada replied back, in an agitated tone. Hermoine sneered and did not reply, only turned to face Harry.

"What do you require of us, my lady?" asked Eragon, bringing the subject back to the matters at hand.

"Must we fight?" he asked again before giving her time to reply.


I am going to stop there, because I'm not sure how to continue. Hope you liked it. Oh, and how awesome was that joke that I cracked at the beginning? Yes!! rambo.gif

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Posted 21 June 2007 - 09:42 PM

thumbsup.gif AWSOME!! Way hilarious ( rofl.gif ) so keep posting!

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