[Thorin]

NOTE: Characters in this story should NOT be taken as examples of the members. The only thing that the characters have in common with the members is the names and whether they are a fan or an anti.


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Prologue

In the quaint city of Christopher Poalini Forum, or CPF City, tensions were flaring. Shouting could be heard from a building with a sign labeling it 'Is Cp Smart, Or Just Lucky?'

Inside, Thorin, Spartan Eragon, and Scarlett were sitting in wooden chairs. Thorin's fists were surrounded by a cloud-like shroud of power that glowed with a powerful salmon color, and a symbol on his armor showed that he was a mod - an AFI Mod, to be exact. Thorin, Scarlett, and Spartan Eragon were glaring at their opponents. Iimortaal was on his feet, shouting in their faces. Behind him, a horde of angry, club-bearing people.

One of iimortaal's followers screamed out, "Let's see you try and with the stuff CP did! I mean, why are you even on this forum if you don't like Inheritance?!"

Spartan Eragon - SE - fumed, "If another one of the new members comes along whining about why we live here, I'm going to have to resort to desperate measures."

The fan, encouraged by all of his allies, shouted, "Why are you here?!"

It became a chant - the whole horde of fans yelled, "Why are you here? Why are you here? Why are you here?"

SE let out an angry scream and her hand flashed down to her belt - she unsheathed a curved sword so fast it blurred. She swung the sword in a wide arc and connected; the fan that had started the chant's head thumped down on the ground.

The mob of fans screeched in horror. Thorin and Scarlett leapt up from their seats and also drew weapons - Thorin hefted a heavy battle-axe, and Scarlett pulled out a wand that glowed with a magical aura. They stepped up to SE's side and held their weapons ready, daring any one of the fans to approach.

Before anyone could move, a loud voice bellowed from the door of the building, "STOP!"

Thorin's eyes - and the direction of his battle-axe - swung over to the entrance. A hooded, cloaked man stood there. The man's fists had the glowing power, like Thorin's, but his were green. A symbol shone on his cloak - he was a Trilogy Mod.

The three antis groaned. A roar of happiness came from the horde of fans. Thorin's fists flared brighter and he spat, "Gonff!"

Gonff stepped into the room. "Yes, Thorin. I see there is some trouble going on here - flaming! I'll not have trouble in my forums between fans and antis. You antis should stop instigating arguments!"

A frown flashed across Thorin's face. "We should? How about you fans, always refusing the reasonable and calm debates and proof of the antis and driving us to anger?"

"Nonsense! You three, get out! Now!"

Thorin was going to argue, but didn't. He had no power here - Gonff did. With a jerk of his head, he signaled to his companions. They grudgingly filed out.

SE sheathed her sword, and Scarlett put away her wand. SE angrily said, "Why did we obey? We could have taken them!"

Scarlett shook her head. "Not with Gonff on their side. He would have put us on mod que before we could do a thing."

Thorin nodded reluctantly. "She's right, SE. But I'm not sure if I can take much more of this - the fans ganging up on us and then the Trilogy and - Mike forbid - Global Mods taking their side! It's infuriating. I can't stand it."

A dangerous light shone in SE's eyes. "We don't have to put with it. We don't have to obey. We could revolt."

Thorin and Scarlett's eyes darted around anxiously. "Not here, SE!" Scarlett whispered urgently. "Too many people could hear."

SE glowered at her, but quieted. The three headed over to the stables and got their horses - Scarlett had a reddish-brown mare, SE had a painted stallion, and Thorin had a dark, dark brown mare. They saddled the horses and set off down the long road from CPF City to General Discussion City. There, they would spread the word. There, they would make their declaration.


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Once again, please note that the character do not necessarily resemble the members. Also, please PM me or leave a comment on my profile saying that you'd like to be in this story, along with whether you are an anti or a fan, and what you'd like your name to be (only if your name is very long or has a lot of numbers - example: Dragondreamer93)

And be aware that this isn't some scheme to turn people against each other - I'm writing it solely for entertainment.

This post has been edited by Thorin: 14 October 2007 - 03:36 PM

[Hoof Hearted]

I love it. Great idea, and it really expresses how the antis and fans don't always get along on the site. *coughputmeinitcough*

Josh

[Kari]

Thorin, this is amazing! I really like it! Please, continue with it!!!

[Gonff]

Dude, this has to be the best story on here!! XD

Genious, Thorin, genious. =D

Yes, you HAVE to write more.

[Llama Brigade]

Nice idea, Thorin! It's good so far

You could put me in it if you want, but I'm pretty much neutral to the series now. You could make the neutral people the ones who parade around with signs that say "Make peace!" and stuff like that. I think you should put in a bit more description, too.

[Thebazilly]

This is up there with Dead and Morzan's fics. Or has the potential to be. Don't bother putting me in, I never go into the Trilogy section anymore.

[Thorin]

Thanks to everyone. The next part:

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Chapter 1


Thorin - whose fists glowed much brighter now that he was in his own section - and Scarlett and SE sat at the front of the huge, crowded tavern of CHWYAB. It had wooden walls that were scratched and worn from lots of use. The stools were wobbly and some broken, but for some reason, people still packed in the old tavern. Thorin stood on a stool - one that was sturdy - and was yelling, "Good people of Inheritance Forums!"

The crowds of people quited down and gave him their attention. He continued. "How many of us here have visited the Trilogy Section?"

A chorus of "Me"s and "I have"s resounded about the place. Thorin shouted, "And how many of us here were mistreated there?"

A deafening roar of agreements almost knocked Thorin off of the stool. He stretched his hands out and his fists' mist-power flared up, and he regained his balance. Then he returned his focus back to the people. "I say we don't put up with it anymore! I say we put a stop to it. I say that we, the antis, revolt!" Thorin raised a fist into the air and bellowed, "I SAY WE FIGHT!!"

The peoples' cheer echoed across General Discussion City. Men and women yelled until they were hoarse, and everyone raised their hands in the air. After a few minutes, they settled down. Thorin continued, this time in a quieter voice. "We will form an army - the Anti-Army! We will crush the feeble, noobish Fan opposition before our powerful might! Posts will be set up. Bases will be established in General Discussion City, in Mature Discussion, in Media-Entertainmentville, and in all of the villages surrounding these cities! If the Fans will not give us equality, then we, the Antis, will take it by force!"

Another cheer. Thorin leapt down from the stool and stood solidly on the ground. "WHO'S WITH ME?!"

The roar of the Antis could be heard throughout the city, and even in Forum Games Village, which was just outside of General Discussion City. The Antis had made their pact - The Anti War had begun.

[Hoof Hearted]

*warns his freinds that are fans*

Josh

[Mean Pinky]

This is awesome.

Please update when you get the chance. ^^

This post has been edited by Mean Pinky: 14 October 2007 - 05:11 PM

[Tabasco Cat]

Lol funny!

[Scarlett]

Whee this is great! Especially when I

pulled out a wand that glowed with a magical aura.

We should definitely have an epic Anti/Fan battle. Something involving, as opposed to, "This is Sparta!":

"THIS IS THE CRITIQUE SECTION!!" -slews fan with blade-

I like "General Discussion City." Another western front the Antis could set up would be Booksandliteraturis, the colosseum of the great Mediaentertainmentappollica in which we battle our claims against Inheritance with many other great armies. (e.g., the army of Potterparta and the legions of Lordoftheringaplyae.)

I can see many "I have a Dream" like speeches:

"I have a plagiarism, and it sits on the red hills of the Critique Sections so that the sons of Tolkien and the sons of Tatooine will be able to sit down together at the table of brotherhoodly classical bookness."

All right, I really should stop

This post has been edited by Scarlett: 14 October 2007 - 06:53 PM

[SergantMajorJefforson]

Nice fic, Thorin.

[Tabasco Cat]

O.o I could lead the Potter Army, which aids the Antis...

[Thorin]

AD, are you even an anti? XD

Scarlett, those are some nice ideas. Hmm. And yea, I gave you a wand to be sort of Harry Potter-ish.

Anyways, I'll probably update tomorrow sometime.

[Tabasco Cat]

Fan-turned-semi-anti. FOR I AM WEIRD!!