[Hoof Hearted]

Revenge - Carl Johnson (CJ)
Morzan202 - Sean Johnson (Sweet)
Mean Pinky - Melvin Harris (Big Smoke)
Skulbaka Shurtugal Yodec - Lance Wilson (Ryder)
Aiedail7 - Kendl Johnson
Saint Rising - Cesar Vialpando
MurtaghFanGirl - Denise Robinson
Mike - Officer Frank Tenpenny
TParis - Officer Eddie Pulaski
Chris - Officer Jimmy Hernandez
Spinner - The Truth
SargentMajorJefferson - Toreno
Madd Dogg - Open
OG Loc - Open (NEED SOON)
Catalina - Open
E33 - Wu-Zi-Mu
(Many more to add in later...as well as some people will be put in as minor characters just because I need a convinient person. )


(If you want a character, just tell me. I don't have it all figured out yet. Right now I really need someone to take the place of OG Loc...erm...Jeffery. )

Five years days ago, Carl Johnson Revenge escaped from the pressures of life in Los Santos Away From Inheritance, San Andreas Inheritanceforums, a forum tearing itself apart with gang trouble, drugs, and corruption. Now he’s back in Grand Theft Auto: ™San AndreasInheritance Forums.

But Carl's family is in dire straits and his friends are headed for disaster. To make matters worse, he's just been framed for homicide.

Join Carl Revenge on his journey across the stateboard of Inheritance Forums as he fights to save his family and take back control of the streetsthreads.

First part to come up soon...

Josh

1st edit: Started putting up links to wikis about each characters. Please be warned, these have possible spoliers.

This post has been edited by Saint Rising: 15 December 2007 - 07:19 PM

[Hoof Hearted]

GrandTheft Auto: Inheritance Forums
Chapter One
Y WELCOME BAC! I BoReD THREAD. BUTTSMECKS?

Spent five weeks at Seventh-Element…now it’s time to go home…

“Hello?”

“Revenge…it’s your brother,”

“Yo, Morzan, what you want?”

“I think you better come home…its your moms, brother, she’s dead…”

“What? I just left about days weeks ago niggah! What you mean she dead? You let her die already? DAYUM!”
***
Revenge’s flashback was interrupted by the sound of police sirens and the taxi he was riding in pulling to the side of the thread. He looked out his back window. “Damn!” he said. “Guess I won’t’ get any Buttsmecks tonight…”

“STEP OUT OF THE CAR!” a voice said, amplified by a megaphone. The person using the megaphone was none other than TParis, a cop in CRASH. Swearing under his breath, Revenge stepped out of the car with his hands up. “Good, now, get down on the ground.” Revenge had no choice but to comply. Lying on his stomach, Revenge was subject to a through weapons search. “And what have we got here?” TParis asked, pulling a wad of post counts from Revenge’s pocket.

“Hey! That’s my money, man! My paper! Give it back!” Revenge said.

“This is drug money!” Officer Mike said, having joined TParis. “Hey, Revenge, you didn’t forget about us, did you?”

“Why the hell would I have forgotten about you? I saw you last Thursday, damn!”

With a sneer, Mike grabbed Revenge by his shirt collar and pulled him up. “Get in the car,” he said, he then threw Revenge onto the ground. “Let’s go,” Revenge had no choice but to comply.

When everyone else was in the car, TParis dealt with the taxi driver. “Go on, get out of here!” he said, making hand gestures at the car. “F***ing Mexican…” he got in the car, getting looks from the last officer, Officer Chris, who was Mexican. “Oh…hey, sorry man.” Chris shook his head and gunned the engine.

As the car rolled through the threads of the AFI section, the occupants of the car talked. “So where you been, Revenge? It’s been, what, five days?”

“Been at Seventh-Element. I’m clean there, legit.”

“Boy, you ain’t never been legit.” Mike said.

“And what do we got here? It seems to be a gun,” TParis said, holding up a 9 Milimeter.

“This is a murder weapon, Officer TParis. Used to gun down a Officer Aaron. A great cop.” Mike said. He turned to Revenge. “You work fast, niggah! Been here for ten minutes and you already killed one of my dudes!”

“Is it even possible to kill a mod?” Revenge asked. “And that ain’t my gun! I’m here to bury my moms, you know that!”

“Yeah, I know that.” Mike said. The car rolled to a stop. “Ahh…here we are!” he looked at Revenge. “Welcome home, Revenge.” With that, they threw Revenge out of the car.

“See you around, Revenge!” TParis said.

“Wow, those guys sure are nice! But…I think they left me in Authoritah territory!” he said. He looked around, and spotted a pair of LAWLerskates. “Perfect! I got to get out of here! I ain’t represented BoReD thread in five days…which really isn’t that long if you think ‘bout it…but the Authoritahs won’t give a f***!” he looked around. “Did I just talk to myself for three lines of text?”

He put on the lawlerskates and took off down the road.

This post has been edited by Saint Rising: 15 December 2007 - 08:24 AM

[Aiedail7]

Hehe, nice. XP Love Revenge's little 'monologue' there.

[SergantMajorJefforson]

Saint... you know my request.

[Hoof Hearted]

Umm...you want to be OG Loc? xD

Josh

[SergantMajorJefforson]

No. But I do want to be in.

[Hoof Hearted]

Well, a character you want to be would help...I've got to figure out a lot of things. Oh, here are update on a taken character.

Spinner - The Truth

Josh

[SergantMajorJefforson]

Well, I haven't played the game...

is there some soldier in it I could fill? Or some partially sane person?

[Hoof Hearted]

Hmm...

Trying to think. There's not really and soldier part that doesn't die without saying a word...or one that is plot important. There is Toreno, who is a government agent. He's hilariously awesome, but isn't introduced for a long time. Past that, there's Wu-Zi-Mu, who is a blind Triad leader.

Josh

This post has been edited by Saint Rising: 15 December 2007 - 09:11 AM

[SergantMajorJefforson]

I'll take Toreno

[Hoof Hearted]

Alrighty, its done.

Josh

[Morvich]

Haha, Sweet, I'm Sweet! xD

Keep it up, dude. =D

[Hoof Hearted]

Chapter Two
Pinky, Morzan, Aiedail.
Wait, There Should be one More!

Revenge skated all day. Sometimes he got lost, even though he had been there five days ago. Authoritah gang members sometimes went after him, but he usually escaped. Eventually he crossed a bridge and turned right. “BoReD thread…home…least it was before I f***ed everything up…five days ago.” He took of the lawlerskates and went into the house of his dead mother, Seres.

The house was pretty much the same as he had left it. He felt sad, and picked up an old family picture from back when Antonis was alive…which was about 6 days ago… and started hearing voices in his head…”What are you doing? Revenge! Antonis, stop it!” Aiedail’s voice said. “Shh! Quit it! Moms’ll hear!” Antonis the Great’s voice said. Revenge couldn’t take it. He sat down in a chair, causing a bit of noise.

He closed his eyes. Damnit…why did I leave? He asked himself, almost in tears.

“YOU PICKED THE WRONG HOUSE TO KNOCK OFF, FOO’!” shouted a loud voice. Revenge quickly turned to see his old childhood friend Mean Pinky holding a baseball bat coming at him.

“HEY! HEY! HEY! PINKY! PINKY! IT’S ME, REVENGE! CHILL! CHILL!!”

“Revenge,” Mean Pinky said. He looked at Revenge, and then loosened up. “Ohhhh! My dog!” he said, grabbing Revenge in a hug. “Hey, man, you okay?”

“Nah…man, it’s my moms, man…” Revenge said.

“Hey, I don’t know why this had to happen, but I’m gonna find out who killed your moms…” Pinky looked around like someone might have been watching him. “The streets is cold, dawg…like it says in the book, we are both blessed and cursed…”

After a second of silence, Revenge spoke up. “What f***in’ book? And what you mean the streets is cold? It’s only been five days, niggah! The streets was warm when I left!”

Pinky didn’t seem to hear him. “The same things that make us laugh, make us cry…” he looked around, then turned to the door. “But right now we gotta take care of our business! Go see your brother at the cemetery!” he said, leading Revenge out. “C’mon, let’s bounce!”

They walked out of the house. “You wanna drive?” Pinky asked.

“Fo sure, nice car, Pinky.”

“You know me, it’s not cut, keep the value in it. Keep it real,” he said. Then the car sped off with Revenge at the wheel. Soon they would come to the cemetery...
***
“They’ve missed you these five days, man! They gonna be real happy to see you,” Pinky said. Jake shook his head. It had only been five days! They were treating him like it had been years! They walked up to a group of three people standing around a grave looking down. “Hey, wassup, y’all! Look who I found hanging around!” he said.

The girl in the group turned around. “Revenge, hey, good to see you,” she said, giving him a hug. It had been five days! Why was Aiedail so happy to see him?

“I can’t believe she gone, man!” Revenge said, looking at his mother’s grave.

“That’s another funeral you ran away from, foo’! Just like Onion's!” Morzan202 said to Revenge

“Hey! She was my momma too!”

“Not for the past five days she wasn’t, niggah!”

“Yeah! Five f***in’ days! That ain’t that long!”

Aiedail was fed up with it. “f*** this!” she shouted, walking away.

“And where the f*** you think you goin’?” Morzan shouted after her.

“Wah? Get out my face! I’m goin’ to see Saint Risin’!” she said, holding up a hand as she walked away.

“THE HELL YOU ARE, GIRL! YOU AIN’T MESSIN’ WITH THEM ESES! YOU KNOW THEY BEEFIN’! THEY AIN’t NOTHING BUT A BUNCH OF LOWLIFES!”

“What you mean? Who the f*** are you? I can see who I wanna see! Revenge tell him!”

“Revenge, don’t tell me s***!” Morzan shouted.

Revenge said something anyways. “As long as he treat you right! Disrespect you, and he’s dead…though I still don’t see how you can kill someone on a forum!”

“That ruined the mood!” Morzan said. He turned to Aiedail. “At least I got principle!”

“F*** you, Morzan!” she said, walking away. “A**hole…”

“Damnit! Stuffs real f***ed up on this website! Everything!”

“What you mean?”

“What, apart from your mother bein’ dead…or banned, whatever comes first?” Morzan shook with fury. “Let me show you! Tony buried over there! Little Eragon buried over there, and big Eragon over there! Everyone blasts on foos first, then asks questions second!” Morzan lost it and decided to leave. The rest of the gang fallowed with them. The only person who hadn’t talked yet was Yodec, who was too busy smoking a joint to talk.
***
When everyone had left the graveyard, everyone headed towards Pinky’s car. But then, a sound came from up the thread. “AUTHORITAH CAR! DRIVE BY! INCOMING!” Yodec shouted.

Everyone dived to the side, and the Authoritah car shot up Smoke’s car. It exploded, leaving charred black remains. “Damnit! We gotta get out of here!” Morzan shouted, ignoring Pinky’s cries of anguish. He spotted a bunch of lawlerskates. “Everyone put on a pair and roll! Even you ain’t forgotten that!”

Everyone started skating, Morzan leading them through the AFI section. The Authoritah car fallowed after them. “I thought this was Spammers’ turf!” Revenge said.

“Yeah, What are you Listening too spammers! We don’t roll with them no more!” Morzan said.

“What? We did five days ago!” Revenge said. No one seemed to hear them, and they continued to skate down the road. They stopped under a bridge.

“Everyone! Split up for no reason, quick!” Morzan then went a different way from everyone else.

Yodec laughed and waved at Revenge. “KEEP UP!” they then took off through the threads. It was just a them fallowing Yodec for awhile, but as they started to get closer to the BoReD thread, it became more of a friendly race. Revenge felt the exhilaration, and managed to beat the other two back.

“Nice, I got them Authoritahs, though. Showed them niggahs who’s gangstah! Morzan, niggah!” Morzan said, appearing out of nowhere. He turned his head to Revenge. “So when you leaving?”

“I dunno…it’s only been five days since I left…I…kind of expected to stay…you guys let this place go to hell in just five days…damn!”

“the last thing we need is your help!” Morzan said.

“I won’t let you down! I swear!”

“whatever…hey, we gon’ all up some section rats, and chill the f*** out. You want some?” Morzan asked.
“I’m tired…I got a whole lot goin’ on…I’ll see y’all later…” Revenge said, heading for his mom’s house.

“Alright, drop by whenever.” Pinky said, going to Morzan’s house with the others.

Been here one day…and I can see that the others don’t know how to run stuff…gonna be hard work…

Josh

This post has been edited by Saint Rising: 17 December 2007 - 05:29 PM

[Aiedail7]

Wow, sibling rivalry. O.o Awesome, Josh.

[Go for Gin]

Wow...this is mildly disturbing...most people can't get away with stuff like this. Then again, most people aren't mods. Or Josh. Or a combination of the two.

Lawlerskates...that's hillarious.