[eternalwarrior]

I got bored at work, so I put pen to paper, and this is what came out.

Questions

Questons racing around my mind
Sometimes the truth is hard to find.
I search and search, and still can't see
The answers keep eluding me.
The less I know, the more I seek
This quest, I've found, is not for the meek.
It's rough and hard, this road I'm on
The paths I travel, are weary, and long.
Somewhere ahead, I'll find the way
And my questions will be answered, on that glorious day.


Thats about it. What do ya think?

This post has been edited by eternalwarrior: 27 January 2008 - 04:58 AM

[Your_Sincerely_Iryna]

niiice,

i liked it =]

[eternalwarrior]

Why thank you. It was kind of random, but I like it too.

Nobody reads this, oh well. Here's another that I wrote in my 10th grade English class.

Dream

One by one they all flew away, like leaves in an Autumn wind.
Leaving me standing on the shore, wondering if I'll ever see them again.
My friends, my comrades, companions brave and true.
With the Eagles on powerful wings, we soared ever the ocean blue.

Now they have faded, now they are gone, chased away by the morning sun.
I open my eyes, remember my dreams, the battles fought and won.
The adventures we shared, and the friends we made, all along the way.
I close my eyes, and take a moment, to say a prayer with all of my heart.
That I'll return to that land, and see them again, some clear and starry night.

This post has been edited by eternalwarrior: 01 February 2008 - 01:36 AM

[gabriella]

Hi I'm gabriella, a fellow poet,
Your topic is so empty, made me sad....Im reading it

Questions, I liked it It's very well written, and the imagery you played was very well done. Although after

I'll find the way

you should put a ( im sorry im french and i always mix up how to say this ) one of those > ,
Ahah. Im so retarted. Anyways. You know this poem kinda makes me want to find out what these questions are...^^ Very well done!!

Dreams, DAMMNNN boyyy ....WOOOW. This is incredible!! The imagery was amazing!! And your flow was aced!! Amazing. Was this one about war? Because, if not, it could be....Its what I saw reading it

Thanks for sharing these, I would love to see more, if your willing to write. And I have alot of experience, so if you have any questions about it, let me know