[moondragon411]

Moondragon411, commonly called Moony, had fallen asleep in the FTD forum, watching everyone lose all of their posts. Her arm twitched, she yawned and stretched.

" Good night Moony! " it was Holynight.

" Why would you say good night if its morning? " she asked.

" I don't know...? ", she said. " Is it morning? "

" Yes. "

" Oh...", she said confused.

The sun suddenly went away like in all of the odd cartoons and the moon came up. Moondragon slapped her head in stupidity, she was in the FTD fourm after all, crazy things happen there. The sun randomly dissapearing is just one, once a shark attacked a car, and th ecar ate the shark.

" HA!! ", Holynight screamed!

Moondragon quickly decided to go to a normal forum. She ran all of the way to the Eragon thread ( Which was rather tiring )

" Where have you been? " Water-and-fire asked. " Not like you to be away from here for so long. "

" I was..." she breathed in deeply. " in the FTD forum..."

" What!! You never go there!!! "

" I know...but ever since that attack on us from the dragons who dwell in the writers hangout..." she sighed. " I have been taking refuge there..."

" I see..."

Just as she said that a giant silver dragon came bursting through tearing down everything in its path! Its silver eyes ate up evereything with a glare.

" ROAR! ROAR! ", screamed Moondragon.

" Why did you just do that? "

" I don't know..."

After that the dragon left in a random motion, leaving all of the dumb idiots to clean up her crap urine, which covered the Brisngr and book four theories thread.

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Mk, whoever wants to be in tell me.

[MooMoose]

As it's only C1, I won't go crazy with crit. I just want to point out some things things:

" I don't know...? ", she said. " Is it morning? "

No need of that comma. You should put, "I don' know...?"

And the fact that you put your commas AFTER the sentence somewhat annoys me.

" HA ", Holynight screamed!

You should put "HA," Holynight screamed!

Great plotline. May I be in it? ^The above wasn't supposed to be mean, just some light crit.

[moondragon411]

Thanks, I didn't mean to do that, it was a simple mistake.

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Chapter two: All of that urine and crap

Moondrago gasped, there was crap evrywhere. There was crap on Moomoose, she was disguted, and Holynight who put her tounge to it, and even on Moondragon, who just sat there dumbstruck.

" Yuck! Thats disgusting Holynight! " Moomoose suddenly said, breaking the silence and the dazed eyes on Holynight.

" What? It is? "

" Yes!!! "

" Oh "

Moondragon shook her head, earning a glance from a guy behind her, thinking that it was a hot girl hair flip. He whistled loudly and Moondragon turned around.

" Who the hell are you, you freaking idiot!! "

The man left, leaving Moondragon cursing her out. They didn't know that she was a girl lasbian. It must be the haircut..

The dragon crap was thought to be choclate and all of the little kids came out of their homes to eat it. Moondragon, Holynight, and Moomoose watched them laughing their heads off.

" MMMMMM!! "

Holyknight had joined them.

Moondragon shook her head again and another whhistle sounded behind her.

" Get the hell out of here! "

Moony had pulled out a gun, out of no where, and shot the lasbian down.

" Where did that come from? " Holyknight asked, her mouth full of crap.

" I dunno. "

This post has been edited by moondragon411: 05 April 2008 - 03:32 PM

[MooMoose]

I probably would scream, just outta shock, then just look horrified ... I live on a farm, crap's not such a big deal. Unless it's Dragon crap.

More???

This post has been edited by MooMoose: 05 April 2008 - 03:27 PM

[moondragon411]

I edited it, for some reason, more than half of it didn't show up, so I had to redo it.

[MooMoose]

Oh, that chapters ... nice. : -)

[moondragon411]

Chapter three: For the forums

" Ouch!! "

" Why is it so dark!?! "

" What happened!? "

....Moondragon flicked the light switch to the friends condo, spreading light onto their faces.

" Ouch! "

" Why is it so bright! "

" What happened? "

Moondragon slammed her head onto the wall out of frustration. All she wanted was a blasted shower, no one could give that much to her.

" I'm going over to Water-and-fire's place for a shower. " she said.

She then slammed the door and left for W&F's house. The pasage was dark and she felt like she was being followed. Eyes seemed to follow her everywhere she went.

" Vat'de hell! " she screamed as some girl jumped on her and took her clothes of.

TO BE CONTINUED

This post has been edited by moondragon411: 05 April 2008 - 06:37 PM

[BeefStew]

Nice. Add more characters. It's boring with 3 people.

[moondragon411]

It was that smae Lasibian from earlier. She had taken her own clothes off and was starting to strip Moondragon's own. What is that wench doing?
" Give me your money or I'll rape you. " that bitchy lasbian said
" What? "
" Give me your money or I'll rape you. "
Moondragon kicked the lasbian in the head and knocked her out. She grabbed her pants and put them back on adn got a magic marker and wrote 'I am a bitchy lasibian ' on her head.
" Har, didtty, Har, Har! "
Then she made a run for it. All the way to W&F's house. Oddly, no one was home so she waltzed in and got in the shower, LALALALALALAALA!!!!! The water was hot and steaming and the crap on her washed off like...well muddy crap...


( Thats all for now, more to come later ) I will edit this post!

[MooMoose]

Lasbian, as in, lesbian?


MORE!

[moondragon411]

Right now, I am depressed, I can't write, my green skin is gone...

[MooMoose]

Oh, how sad. Why isn't your skin peach or brwon, red, or yellow, like everyone else's?


...


Are you an alien?

This post has been edited by MooMoose: 08 April 2008 - 08:03 AM

[moondragon411]

No, your thinking of Bob.

[Aryalover89]

Your IF skin is back Moondragon. Can you please update now? It's a great story so far. I was hoping you could add an admin. or mod. into the story to make it more interesting.

[moondragon411]

I'm araid of being banned *Shivers*