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Into the IFatrix C2. Please comment and crit! Thanks. Rate Topic: ****- 3 Votes

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Posted 04 May 2008 - 09:05 AM

If you don’t like how I portray you (if you are a character in the story), sorry…Don’t take it personally

Chapter 1: Selection
“Fear me, mortals, for I shall decide your fate”. Mike boomed as he sat upon his throne of skulls. He looked down at the hundreds of his subjects.

Arthryn coughed at the leg of his throne. “With help from Arthryn” Mike said quietly.

“I will now decide which of you will enter the IFatrix”. The subjects looked nevously to each other.

“BeefStew” He shouted and all eyes were trained onto her.

“Elazar” Elazar looked to Tim for help, but there was none to be found.

“Renegade” Renegade looked at Elazar and they shared a mutual decision that they would watch each others back”

”Saphira^_^” She swore under her breath.

Mike leaned forward on his throne and called the four forward. He waved his arms about and opened up a firry portal. The four took one last look at their friends and stepped through.

Falling, falling, landing, pain. Renegade landed in a heap on the floor. He looked around, it was white everywhere, no objects, no nothing. He looked up and saw Elazar falling towards him

“Look out” Elazar shouted, but it was too late, he landed on Renegade.

“Aww man, that hurts” Renegade groaned.

“Yeh, so will this” Elazar ageed as BeefStew landed on the pile. Elazar and Renegade cried out in pain, but BeefStew didn’t, the maled had broken her fall. But her smile vanished as she was landed on by Saphira^_^.

“Weapons” came a voice and out of nowhere weapons appeared. Everywhere they looked were swords, spears, axes, staffs, chains.

“Damn, there fantasy weapons” Elazar said as he picked up an axe.

“What, no lasers or chainsaws or fusion blaster thingys” BeefStew exclaimed.

“Well how many fantasy stories have fusion whatsits and that other crap. Now hurry up, I’m board. Oh and you only have 100gp.”

“What, you mean it costs stuff?” Saphira^_^ said. She thought a while and said “Arthryn, is that you?”

“Yeh, now get a move on!” Arthryn shouted. Renegade picked up a thin blade, Elazar, a double bladed axe, BeefStew, a selection of serrated, hooked knives that looked like they were ment to hurt more coming out than going in and Saphira^_^ took a staff and twirled it round her head.

“Finnaly” Arthryn muttered. The world of light vanished and they were plunged into a world of black.

This post has been edited by i2enegade: 05 May 2008 - 12:32 PM

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Posted 04 May 2008 - 11:27 AM

Sweet, I have a staff. Also, everything so far is pretty much exactly how I would act. xD
Just put my name as Saphy, it would be easier.

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Posted 04 May 2008 - 11:38 AM

Okidoki, Please could you post a little description of your self, so I don't make you look diferent or act wrongly. I normally wouldn't care, but this way, I can avoid problems. It also allows me to add new characters easier.

So, if you want to be in the story, fill this out.

Name (Please include your username and any nick name you'd rather be known by)

Gender

Apperance (What do you look like)

Personality (how you act)

Abilities (Magical or not)

For new characters, you can either be, some demon, opponent, organisation, obstical or whatever you can think of to hinder our beloved Debatable for some, characters.
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Posted 04 May 2008 - 06:10 PM

That was pretty funny about Mike on the throne of skulls. If you need more charectors, I'll fill out a thingy.

Hey all, it's little ol' me again. WOOT!

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Posted 04 May 2008 - 06:23 PM

I would too

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With help from Arthryn

^^funny

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Posted 04 May 2008 - 09:04 PM

o.gif, I have throwing knives!

Very intriguing, very nice! Update soon!


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Posted 04 May 2008 - 09:08 PM

Im in, i'd love to see how you potray me ;).gif


Name: Adaminator3 (Think of a nickname)

Gender: Male

Appearance: Anything, as i can shapeshift ;).gif

Personality: A Stuck up punk who fights anyone, any time.

Abilities: Shape-Shifting into anything possible (Yes, even a brick wall.)

Interests: Cross-dressing. It turns me on.

And i am an obstacle...

There you are, another er... "Obstacle" for your beloved characters to run into...

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Posted 04 May 2008 - 09:17 PM

Okay, I am filling out a form.

Name: Kazza

Gender: Female

Apperance: Dark brown hair (long and normally out) and eyes. Almost black. Also, I'm slightly short.

Personality: Reserved, caring, sweet, bright (I'm doing this with my friend staring over my shoulder giving 'input')

Abilities: WINGS! and elemental control.

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Posted 04 May 2008 - 09:18 PM

My Mikey on a pail of skulls!

Name: .....Moondragon but you can call me Moony smile.gif

Gender: Female

Appearance: I have dark brown hair, almost black, with blonde streaks going through it. My eyes are called cat eyes and they change color at times ( yes in real life ) They are normally a forest green or hazel. My hair is a little above shoulder length. Most of my hair is off to my left side and around a quarter is on the right.

Personality: I am a very timid person, even when I try to act tough I am not. When you get me in a fight the person who is fighting me will be very sorry, for when you get me out on the field you are in trouble. I am aggresive, but only when put in a fight, other than that I am just timid. I am obsessed with Mike and I am is fangirl so whenever I hear his name ( Weither in a good way or not ) I do a fangirl scream.

Abilities: I am a swift person, I can outrun almost anyone. I go crazy at the mention of Mike ( Which can be useful in battle ) I kick ass and curse anyone out when I get the chance.

( Can we have magical abilities? ) If so I'd like to be able to control the elements, be more powerful when the moon is up, and be able to read minds. I can sick animals on people. Use magic ( Normally magic that hurts ( black magic ) ) AND I can turn into a white dragon with scaled that looked like a piece of the moon )

This post has been edited by moondragon411: 04 May 2008 - 09:36 PM

You shouldn't really listen to what I say, as it's usually stupid.

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Posted 04 May 2008 - 09:32 PM

Wooah I'm totally filling this out for the power part!

Name: Saphy or Kristin, either one.

Gender: Female

Apperance: Dirty blonde, shoulder length hair with blackish-blue tips. About 5'2" and a half. Blue eyes, sometimes a little green. <-- This is my actual appearance and I seriously do get my hair dyed. I used to have black, purple, and red streaks but it cost a lot and grew out relatively fast so now it's just the tips.

Personality: Pretty much how you've portrayed it so far. Once in a while I'm crazy and sometimes a little mean but I'm nice to my friends.

Abilities: I call transforming into animals and being able to talk to them! My favorite animal is a wolf. Black wolves are cool but any type is awsome.

If everyone else is getting some special power so am I. xD

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Posted 04 May 2008 - 09:40 PM

Name: TP Fan Girl

Gender: Female

Appearance: I have blue, rubbery skin and orange, poufy hair. My eyes are somewhere between red and pink, and I have 2 sets of prosthetic fangs. I wear silver, hooden unitards and black, shiny tap shoes. Around my shoulders I wear the hide of TP, who I skinned for pleasure. I am very sexy.

Personality: I am a spontaneous person to a fault. And extremely lazy.

Abilities: Tap dancing.



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Posted 04 May 2008 - 09:46 PM

Name: BeefStew/BS

Gender: Female

Apperance: Sexiest person on IF. Black hair. Dark skin. Brown eyes. Tall.

Personality: Crazy and Random.

Abilities: I have the power to seduce any male I want to. I can also cook well! And I can swim. Very well.


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Posted 05 May 2008 - 12:16 AM

Wow, this has been recieved pretty well. Lots of "Obsticles" now. I just need Elazar to post his and them we're ok. Update coming soon, once i write it. thumbup.gif
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Posted 05 May 2008 - 01:40 AM

Name: Elazar

Gender: Male

Apperance: 5'11" Slightly pointed ears (not joking), Brown hair almost shoulder length, medium build.

Personality: I'm probably one of the most stubborn you'll find, and I will argue almost everything that is presented that does not seem right or fair for everyone, and if I hold a belief. I support it with everything that I can, and argue my position with and

Abilities: Gimme Magic! XD. I'm a fantasy RPer. The magic flows through me through RPing. XD


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Posted 05 May 2008 - 12:09 PM

Here you go, AN UPDATION!!!!



Chapter 2: Ambush

The four chosen walked cautiously down the stony tunnel. All of them were unnerved, partially at the darkness of the tunnel, but mainly at the thought of having Arthryn as a god and to have her dictating their lives. Every drip caused them to flinch. The continued down the seemingly endless tunnel. The only plus of the situation, was that it was getting lighter, from what, they didn’t know.

Out of no where leapt a demon. A twisted hideous demon. It had the body of a large wolf, but with the head of a wild boar. It roared and lunged at them. BeefStew abandomed her show of bravery and dropped to the floor screaming. Saphy wasn’t so slow to act, she charged forward and swung her staff round and hammered the beast with hard blows.

Renegade and Elazar watched in amazement as she knocked the crap out of that hairy hybrid.

“That was bloody awesome” Ryn said, “How did you learn to do that?”

“Its easy, all you do is hit it over and over again”. She answered. “ Now come on”. She grabbed BeefStew off the floor and pushed her forwards.

“And so the four move forward, unaware of the peril they were in” Arthryn’s voice came.

“Eh, what peril,” Elazar asked.

“Well you just wait and see” Arthryn answered

“Hey this isn’t like a birthday parcel, we don’t enjoy the surprises”. He answered back.

“Yeh, well, its for my own amusement then.” Arthryn answered.

Elazar grumbled and continued down the tunnel with the others. They came to a large cavern. They walked to the middle and look around. Seemingly out of nowhere, the out side became filled with armed men. They closed in and from the front stepped a male with spiky clothing and hair. He was dressed in leather and had metal on his boots.

“Behold, I am Adaminator,” he boomed. Next to him, a blue rubbery skinned woman with poofy orange hair rolled her eyes, On her silver unitard, was a pin with “TP Fan Girl” on.

“I thought she was supposed to be sexy!” Elazar muttered to Ryn.

“Yeh, to demons”. He replied and the pair lauged.

“Yeh well, I’m off to bed, you can sort this out”. TP yawned to Adaminator. She began to tap dance with tremendous skill. After about 10 seconds, she shot up the air. Smacked her head on the roof and collapsed back on the floor, only to wake again and begin tap dancing again. This time, she simply disappeared.
Once everyone’s attention had been torn away from the supposedly sexy TP Fan Girl, BeefStew told her party to leave this to her. She stepped forward and unbuttoned her cloak. She let it drop, showing a tight, bit-more-than-quite revealing outfit that showed off her delightful curves. All males in the cave shared an undivided attention to her. Soldiers craned the necks to get a better view.

“Now that’s sexy!” Ryn told Elazar and all he could do was nod in amazement.

“Now your not going to take us away are you” she said to Adaminator as she traced his face with her finger.


“Per-lease” Saphy muttered. “Why don’t we just make it rain pancakes on them” She added.

Someone behind her, either Elazar or Ryn, she couldn’t quite tell said “That can be Plan B”

Once Adaminator found his tongue, he said “Well, I have to, but I’m sure you and I can come to some agreement”.

“And what might that involve?” BeefStew said as she brought her face very close to his.

“Err……I let you go, and you give me something in return”. He replied and winked.

“Not good enough” she said and plunged a dangerous looking knife into his belly.

As Adaminaor slumped to the floor, TP Fan Girl materialised next to him. “You just can’t do anything right, you worthless punk. Just you wait until Greater Demon Aaron hears of this.” She glanced at the soldiers, “Well, what are you waiting for, ATTACK” she screamed.
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