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The IF Organization (C0) (Chapter Eight is up) ...........*Is Banned*......... Rate Topic: ***** 2 Votes

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Posted 28 April 2008 - 02:07 AM

I Was bored, and decided to write this, uhh.... 'piece of work'. Enjoy!

Chapter One

“Junk, Junk, Spam, oh wait! I’ve won free admin privileges! No, wait, that’s spam...” Adaminator3 ran through his list of PM’s. Unfortunately, someone kept on sending him spam, and he didn’t know why. 10 more messages remained, however…

“Spam, Spam, Junk, Complaints, Reports, Dream Interpretations, Itiocity Central replies… Oh? What’s this?” his mouse hovered over a PM with an empty subject. It didn’t say who sent it, only when it was sent – 3.00 A.M, the same time he refreshed the page, only to find more spam. He clicked on the message, thinking it wasn’t spam or anything.

His eyes widened in shock.


“Athryn has been kidnapped and taken to Rolleston, we don’t know why, but you are the ONLY member in that area. We have no idea why, but I think you should look for her. NOW.”


Adaminator3 sighed, and ran his hands through his greasy hair. The same admin had threatened to ban him 10 times in a row, because he kept PM’ing her asking about the spam he kept on receiving. And why was she taken here of all places? He thought she lived over the other side of the world, in America or something? Adaminator3 moved his mouse over to the reply button, but there was none – What the--?

The doorbell rang, and it started raining. Heart pounding, Adaminator3 switched off his monitor and walked towards the large, walnut door. He wrenched it open, only to find nothingness, he couldn’t even see the road. Maybe it was because of the large, thick black bag pulled over his head? Probably.

“You will come with us now, or pay the price. We know you have our leader.” Said a misty, dark voice. “Who are you? What Leader?” Adaminator3 replied, curious. Could this be about Athryn’s Disappearance?

“You are aware of the recent disappearance on IF?”

“IF? The Forum IF?”

“No, the organization. The forum is a cover—“

“Darth Futuza, you’re telling him too much!” He was interrupted.

“Sorry, Spinner. Wont happen again. Now, as for you…”

“Put him in the damn truck already, lets go before his parents come home!”

“Come home? He lives in his parents house?”

“Yeah, he’s Fifteen for crying out loud.”

“Oh – right, sorry.”

Adaminator3 was shoved inside a large van by now, and Saint Rising (With the help of his friend) Drove off, into the night.
‘The IF Organization? What is that? Their leader has gone missing? All I wanted was a place to post my Original Writing…’
thought Adaminator3, as the van silently rolled down the darkened street.


*End of chapter One*

(Hopes i dont get the banhammer over making athryn Dissapear in my IF Fiction)

This post has been edited by Adaminator3: 08 May 2008 - 10:14 PM


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Posted 28 April 2008 - 02:26 AM

Pssh, Arthryn would never allow herself to be kidnapped. She'd be the kidnapper.


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Posted 28 April 2008 - 03:08 AM

You have to admit. BS's right there. She'll probably read this and be amused at the idiocy of it.

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Posted 28 April 2008 - 03:11 AM

QUOTE (Kazza)
You have to admit. BS's right there. She'll probably read this and be amused at the idiocy of it.


Its another thing when its the forces of evilness and idioticness are the ones who kidnapped her ;).gif

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Posted 28 April 2008 - 03:20 AM

But Arthryn is a force of evilness. Not idiocy, but evilness.

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Posted 28 April 2008 - 03:24 AM

QUOTE (Kazza)
But Arthryn is a force of evilness. Not idiocy, but evilness.


The plan was idiotic enough to work, in other words tongue.gif

Okay, if you dont beleive me, this was the plan the bad guys used it to get her with tongue.gif (Note: These are probably the same blueprints they used too)



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Posted 28 April 2008 - 03:39 AM

Epic.

Its nice to see an IF story without Arthryn being the kidnapper. Its definitely an original idea tongue.gif

What of this... IF Organisation?

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Posted 28 April 2008 - 04:02 AM

rofl.gif
Now that would be funny. Honestly, though, wonder what Arthryn will do when she reads this?

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Posted 28 April 2008 - 07:13 AM

I think it's good. As long as you totally don't ignore the request to free her and she isn't being tortured in some horrible cruel way, I don't think anything should happen to you. Of course that's just me in my own little world with the insanity level reaching it's bursting point but...

Hey all, it's little ol' me again. WOOT!

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Posted 28 April 2008 - 07:16 AM

Hopefully she'll just laugh.

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Posted 28 April 2008 - 05:45 PM

QUOTE (unconquerableflame @ Apr 28 2008, 01:05 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Hopefully she'll just laugh.


Maybe i'll get LolBanned or something :S

And now, for chapter Two... biggrin.gif

Chapter Two

Adaminator3’s eyes flickered open, uncertainly. His vision was blurry, and he was tied to a chair, hands bound, so he couldn’t escape. What was with all of the masked people standing around him? His eyes slowly focused, and he realized he was a captive.

“Wh… Where am I?” He said, uncertainly. He received a sharp blow to the head.

“OW! Quit it! What was that for?” He asked, rubbing his sore head.

“Quiet! Or you will receive the Banhammer!”

“Banhammer? I thought that just meant being banned from the forums?” Adaminator3 said, confused.

“Arget Skulblaka, Bring in… The Banhammer.”

“Yes, master.” She left the room, looking pretty evil.

As it turned out, the Banhammer really was a hammer, only massive.


Adaminator3’s eyes widened.

“Now, are you going to talk, or are you going to die? Your choice” Came a voice from the darkness. It was Spinner.

“I Didn’t kidnap Athryn!” Adaminator3 yelled, furiously, fighting against his bind. Jeez, these guys were stubborn. Arget Skulblaka raised the banhammer, an evil glint in her eyes.

“Wait, I think he is telling the truth, Athryn was taken here, not kidnapped here” Said someone from the distance. Adaminator3 couldn’t make the shape out, but he could tell it was roughly feminine.

“Beef Stew, how can you tell?” Asked Spinner, curiously.
“Look at his eyes.”

The evil glint in Arget Skulblaka’s eyes faded.

“But sir, I really wanted to hurt him!” She whined.

“Take the banhammer away, we wont be needing it. Go whack some puppies, if you want”

Arget Skulblaka laughed evilly.

“As you wish, master…”, and she withdrew from the room, looking very evil indeed.

“What’s going to happen to the puppies?” Adaminator3 asked, curious.

“You don’t want to know.” Said Spinner, untying Adaminator3 from his binds. He stood up, and looked around, curiously.

“Where am I?” He said, confused.

“Welcome to the IF Organization.”

*End Chapter Two*

I Wonder what athryn's going to do when she sees this...?

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Posted 29 April 2008 - 02:13 AM

That. Is. Funny.

People keep portraying me as the... I guess you could say tough one ...

Like, SB's Zombie story... I went around shooting zombies tongue.gif

This is entertaining. Don't stop writing!

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Posted 29 April 2008 - 02:21 AM

I have great powers of detection and deduction?

biggrin.gif, it is good, but I didn't understand what I said.


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Posted 29 April 2008 - 02:31 AM

But where's Arthryn?

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Posted 29 April 2008 - 02:34 AM

Be patient tongue.gif

I'm sure we'll find out soon enough...

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