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Posted 28 July 2008 - 01:43 PM

This is just a little story on Halo that I decided to write.

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Matt, peered though the whole in the wall.

Three Brutes, an Elite, and a bunch of Grunts. Easy. He thought.

"Sniper," he motion for the gun. He aimed through the whole.

BANG, BANG! Two Brutes dropped dead, the rest of the group turn around alert, looking for the battalion of human soldiers. Matt screamed, "Attack! Now!"

The twenty soldiers, and the Spartan, Matt, ran out into the opening. He slung the sniper rifle across his back and pulled out two SMGs. He dived at the remaining Brute while the others took care of the Grunts and Elite. The Brute turned just in time and bellowed and ran at him, Matt however had thown at a plasma grenade at it landed on the Brute's neck. The Brute all the while was running at Matt, planning to take him down with it.

Matt, however, ripped out a gravlift and threw it in front of the Brute.

Woosh, The Brute went flying in the air and excploded, sending body-parts everywhere.

"Poor little bugga," he said looking at the remains of a Brute, "He had it coming."

The other soldiers were struggling to over-power the Elite. He pulled out the sniper rifle, took aim, BANG.

The Elite dropped to the ground, dead.

"Nice one, Matt," a soldier called out,"One in a million shot!: another called out, "Well at least for one of us." He continued rambling on about how skilled the Spartans were.

Matt rolled his eyes and asked if anyone was injured, or dead.

"No one?" he asked obviously suprised, though his face was concealed behind the Mjolnir Mark IV helmet, matching the rest of his armour.

He sighed and said, "Intercom, activate. This is Spartan 219, we have neutralized enmy forces, we need a pelican to pick us up. Our coordinations are..." he told the necessary information to the reciever at the base. Not half an hour later they were picked up.

He immediately sat down and took off his helmet, revealing a strong face, bright blue eyes, with freckles dotted all over the place, filling his face, short brown hair covered his head. The battalion stared at him in awe. He smiled at them and looked back down at his helmet. He thought about his family, how the Brute almost got to him.

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That's just a quick chapter I just wrote, they'll all be fairly short.

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Posted 28 July 2008 - 01:48 PM

Wow really good! A few typos, but overall, pretty good!

Can't wait for update!


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Posted 28 July 2008 - 01:55 PM

Thanks, my keys don't work all the time, you have to press pretty hard on the keys, it's annoying.


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Posted 28 July 2008 - 02:14 PM

When will you have an update??


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Posted 28 July 2008 - 02:16 PM

Sometime today, Glad you like it though. thumbsup.gif


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Posted 28 July 2008 - 02:17 PM

Cradical! Can't wait!

I may even stay on for the update, instead of going to the beach! tongue.gif

No but seriously, can't wait.


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Posted 28 July 2008 - 02:48 PM

Oh, you can go to the beach, I'll do one quick intro to a new character tongue.gif.
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Matt walked down the hall to his room. His room-mate John was there, he nodded to him, looking grim. John asked, "How was it? Anyone I know die?"

"No one died," He looked up, "Fortunately." He added, quickly.

"Are you sure you're ok? You seem, a bit, uhhh," he searched for the right word, "Depressed." The word echoed of the walls.

Matt looked up, a single tear cascaded down his cheek, "I almost died. If I didn't use the gravity lift, I wouldn't be here." He sighed and went into his bed chamber and closed it, sealing himself in the cylinder. He look out of the window, John was looking at him sympatheticly, even the John couldn't see him, he looked away.

Matt looked at the roof of the chamber, "My love," he whispered, touching the picture of a beautiful woman with black hair, "My love, Antoinette" he moved into a comfortable position and slumbered deeply, dreaming of is home back on Earth.

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Posted 28 July 2008 - 02:51 PM

Read the rules, n00b. This goes in Fanfiction, not Original Writing.

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Posted 28 July 2008 - 03:00 PM

Halo is a book?


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Posted 28 July 2008 - 03:40 PM

No, but this isn't your own work thought up directly from yourself. This is HALO a computer game. Your doing something based on it, so it goes into fanfic. If your doing something that is not based on anything, and you thought of it yourself, it goes here.

BTW:
UPDATE SONG TIME!

Verse 1:

I... am waiting for an update, longing for an update, I wanna see an update...
I... am waiting for an update, longing for an update, I wanna see an update...

Main chorus:

I... am waiting for an update, longing for an update, I wanna see an update...
I... am waiting for an update, longing for an update, I wanna see an update...

Verse 2:

I... am waiting for an update, longing for an update, I wanna see an update...
I... am waiting for an update, longing for an update, I wanna see an update...

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Posted 28 July 2008 - 03:44 PM

There are FIVE Halo books, titles are: Contact Harvest, The Fall of Reach, First Strike, The Flood, and Ghosts of Onyx. Although I'm not sure if thats the exact order.

Read them, they are excellent!!!

I'll read your story in just a second.

And DR, he is a newb, not a noob.

And CD, it was a Xbox game before it was avalible for PC (pretty sure).

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Posted 28 July 2008 - 03:52 PM

Tomato - tomato

XBox is still a computer anyway.


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Posted 28 July 2008 - 03:54 PM

No it isn't, same company though.


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Posted 28 July 2008 - 03:59 PM

There are loads of companies that make PC's GE. lol.


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Posted 28 July 2008 - 05:18 PM

I mean computer software, Microsoft.


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