[Cassius Clay89]

Prologue:

Diary Entry of Lee Grant, May 27th, 2020.

The wind howled wildly like a pack of Wolves on a hunt, blowing men all across the ship. A wave rose above the ship and crashed down on some of the Spetzna men, washing them out into the North Pacific ocean. My wounds itched with pain as the salty water entered the soft flesh, I muttered a prayer to myself and was whipped until my arm bled like a running tap. There were six men left on the ship, four of the Russian Secret Service, and me and my comrade, Sergeant Soap. I nodded towards him and pulled out my knife, stabbed one man in the leg and picked up his AK-47. Soap did the same but picked up a M4 Carbine. We sprayed a across the deck, and hit two more men, leaving two left.

After sorting the rest, we rushed to the control room - picking up our weapons, ammunition and our microphones.

"Come in Charlie, come in" I shouted into the mic.

"Charlie here, where are you Bravo?"

"Just off the coast of Asia, we've got four flares ready to be deployed."

As I finished my sentance I felt a gun touch my head and the click the gun makes once it was loaded. I turned and Soap was there, holding that Magnum. I quickly swept him and knocked him out cold in a flash. After around three minutes, he was tied up.

I could hear beeping from the cupboard, as I opened the door I saw the worst thing I could have imagined. A bomb.

News Reporter: These were the last words documented by Lee Grant which were found by divers. He was a great man and Lieutenant of the 2nd Staffordshire regiment. Our saddest regards are sent to the family of Grant, who it seems, died three days ago.

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In that first line, I'd imagine that wind would have to be incredibly strong to blow men around a ship, are you quite sure about that line? Maybe the ship tilting around could cause them to stumble instead, that could make more sense.

That's really all I have to say, since your prologue is short. It's a generally good start, but more description about the characters could do some good. Will we see an update soon?