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Post icon  Posted 01 November 2008 - 09:46 AM

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I know Clank is somewhat in the effects, but the main point is Ratchet.
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Posted 01 November 2008 - 10:48 AM

I really like this, but there seems to be something wrong with it, but I can't put my finger on it.

I'm not sure about the text. However, I'm never good with text anyways, so I don't know if it's good or not. p.gif


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Posted 01 November 2008 - 12:22 PM

Yeah the text is in the wrong place, and the font could be better to be honest. Maybe think about a different colour font.

The effects are good, but I think the whole thing is too blurred. There is not enough depth because you have tried to put too much depth into it.

You need something in the foreground, like Clank, to be sharpened.

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Posted 01 November 2008 - 01:29 PM

Well, I totally suck at text so, I'll do the other stuff.

MotB, so you are pretty much saying to have Clank more visable?
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Posted 01 November 2008 - 02:47 PM

Just sharpen Clank. And for the text, try putting it behind Ratchet. I agree with all the other stuff motb said.

BTW, Ratchet ≤ Jak.

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Posted 01 November 2008 - 04:13 PM

I am saying to make Clank more visible and have an actual foreground.

In order to achieve proper depth, you need to have stuff in front of your focal point and behind.

And yeah the text is shite.

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Posted 01 November 2008 - 04:33 PM

Lol, that looks pretty creative. Nice job. I like the weapon.
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Posted 02 November 2008 - 09:26 AM

I think youy need more sharpness or solidness in teh sig. It's all toooo blurry, and the text sticks out too much, and that's not something you'd want in this kinda sig. So, maybe move the text, make it less 'there', and also, that blurry red thing next to Clank is o.O

Otherwise, good job!


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