Posted 25 November 2008 - 10:13 AM
I like the overall effect of the sig, but it just seems sorta incomplete. The empty areas around the edges of the sig could have done with one, or maybe two extra effects that would give the sig a better, and more complete feel.
The blue swirl detracts from the sig, rather than adds to it as I'm sure you intended it to. It seems random, and it really doesn't need to be there. Also, it draws attention away from the render, since it has more color than anything else in the sig. Lowering the opacity or saturation of it, or completely removing it altogether, will make the sig look better, and attract more attention towards the render.
While your sig does suffer from a few setbacks, it still looks decent, and with a few alterations, it can look really good.