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#1 User is offline   Joey Vice Icon

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Posted 15 January 2009 - 09:32 PM

Sorry that this is in drama script form, but this is nessasary.


CHAPTER 1

(Jak, Daxter, Torn, Sig, and Ashelin are siting in Daxter's new bar, The Naughty Ottsel, in Haven City. After Daxter finishes filling of the glasses, he sits down and lets out a happy sigh)

Daxter: *sigh* What a great day to live.

Jak: .....WHAT? I ALMOST GOT KILLED TODAY BY A BUNCH OF SPARGUS CITIZENS!!!

Sig: Like I told you before Doughboy, that was a test.

Jak: *rolls eyes*

Daxter: Sooooooooo, anyone heard of that new book that came out?

(everyone grunts and sighs)

Torn: Just wondering, why did they name a dragon after me in that book?

Daxter: Just wondering, CAN YOU SHUT UP? I like the plot in that story.

Torn: Well i don't.

Jak: Look Dax, most people don't want to hear or read a story about dragons, Like Brisingr, right after a war with metal heads.

Daxter: awwww, they will get over it.

Ashelin: Anyways, I just got word form Metro City that they have got rid of the last metal head nest there and Surda is save form that threat.

Jak: And the leader?

Ashelin: Woking on geting a vacation.

Daxter: Figures, the guy is always so sad when I see him.

Jak: Well, you've only seen him on TV, and we've never been...

(a guard comes in from outside)

Guard: Torn, Torn, *trips* AHHHH!

Daxter: no one even touched you and you still fell to the ground. What a sorry case!

Guard: Shut up Daxter. Anyways, Torn! We found a rift ring right outside the bar! and it's ACTIVE!

Torn: WHAT?

Guard: I'll explain later, right now, just come and see!

(everyone exits the bar, Daxter on Jak's Shoulder, Sig carring a Peace Maker, and Torn and Ashelin loading ther guns. The Guard points his gun towred a large ring with a purple light inside it.)

Guard: see, i told you so.

Daxter: har har har.

Sig: Thats weard, i'm sure that the last ring was found in the wasteland.

Torn: And Keira said that the one at the metal head nest warped to another time. Something does not seam right...

(Jak moves colser to get a better look)

Daxter: Um, Jak, That ring was...

Jak:...The old ring at the metal head nest!

Sig: WHAT? HOW?

Jak: It must of came to this time by chance, but I don't see how...

(A force form the ring overwlems Jak & Daxter and the two fall in the ring. With a loud snap, the ring falls apart and leaves the others standing there, shocked)

Torn: ...WELL DON'T JUST STAND THERE! GET THE RING TO THE FORT RIGHT NOW!

Guard: Sir, yes sir!

Torn: Where the hell are you Jak? Where the hell are you?


(Jak & Daxter wake up to see a field with tents on a hill. As they move closer, many of the people start to mock Jak because of his ears, as they were different form thier round but short ears. Whan Jak stands in the middle of the field, he hears a loud thump in the sky. Looking up, he sees a large blue dragon with it's bright scales sparkeling in the sky.

Daxter: AHHHHHHH! JAK! DO SOMETHING!

(without even thinking, Jak took out his Blaster, aimed and fired. The dragon fell out of the sky and seemed to land on a bunch of tents)

Daxter: ...8, 9, 10! Knockout! Yeah Jak! Us 1, Dragons 0!

(right at that time an enraged bloned haired man with elven ears, pointed but still short, came to the middle of the field, right where Jak was standing and shouted so that all could hear)

???: OK, WHO SHOT DOWN SAPHIRA?

This post has been edited by Joey Vice: 15 January 2009 - 09:42 PM

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Posted 16 January 2009 - 08:37 PM

This is.....different. Amazingly, I want you to write more. I kind of want to see what happens. You should keep writing. It made me laugh. newlaugh.gif newlaugh.gif newlaugh.gif
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Posted 16 January 2009 - 10:11 PM

Your wish is my command! Alright! Places everyone!
.....AND ACTION!!




Chapter 2

(The area with tents. Jak, Daxter, and a strange man-elf are standing in the middle of a crowd. Jak had shot down a dragon, who had the name Saphira, and this man wanted to know who did it.)

???: WELL, TELL ME NOW!!!

Daxter:...Um....Jak....

Jak: What?

Daxter: I don't think that was the best thing to do.

Jak: YOU TOLD ME TO DO SOMETHING, SO I DID IT!

(Everyone looks at J&D)

Jak:.......

Daxter:........what?

(the man turns around to see Jak still holding the gun)

???: What a pathetic person. You will be easy to kill.

Daxter: What? Did you think we shot her? Come on now Eragon, we would NEVER do that, right Jak?......JAK?

Jak: Eragon? What the hell?

Daxter: Yes, That is his name.

Jak: WHY ARE YOU TELLING ME THIS NOW?

Daxter: Because we are about to die and it will not really matter anymore.

Jak: WHAT?

Daxter: Say Goodnight Jak! Enjoy geting your butt kicked!

(Daxter tryes to run away, But Eragon kicks him and he lands right next to Jak's left foot)

Daxter: arghhhhh

Jak: Goodnight Dax.

Daxter: Shut up.

(Eragon mumbles some words and binds Jak, droping his gun in the proacess. Jak sturgles angenst Eragons bind, fighting an invisable enemy)

Eragon: It's time for you to die freak.

(Just then, the dark eco inside Jak starts to curliulate inside, and jak turnes into dark Jak)

Eragon: What the...

(Jak breaks Eragon's bind and starts to claw at the rider. Right when things looked like they were geting worse, Jak heard a voice in his mind.)

???:Jak...calm down...this is only your anger trying to kill my rider...I know where you came from, and I know that you didn't know...

Jak: (calming down) Huh?

Saphira: I'm the dragon you shot down, Saphira. Sleep now little one.

(jak suddenly falles asleep on the ground next to Eragon)

Eragon: Impresive....

Daxter: Jak? Jak? Wake up Jak! Don't step into the light Jak, DON'T STEP INTO THE LIGHT!

This post has been edited by Joey Vice: 19 January 2009 - 08:00 PM

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