[Fusaichi Pegasus]

*Enter Presenter*

Due to popular demand, best-selling author, Professor Blagden has returned from his success of Du Erundalmaka to write a sequal, to his interpretation of the 4th book of Christopher Paulini's best-selling fantasy series. The book, entitled ''Alalea'', is hopefully as mind--blowing as Du Erundalmaka.
Because of the success of Du Erundalmaka, no shop will sell Alalea for fear of customer riots. Therefore Alalea maybe read for free on the internet, at Inheritancforums.com.

*Enter Professor Blagden*

Hello my dear fans. If you haven't already read Du Erundalmaka you can read it
here. Otherwise you can request a PDF version by e-mailing me at: anthonylynch14@yahoo.com. To understand my sequel to the cycle, you will need to read it.

Here is my Prologue:

Inheritance Book 5: Alalea


Prologue

The journey was finally over. A sea voyage of one month into the blue. Eragon and Arya had finally reached the coast of Alalea. As the boat reached the shores of the fabled continent, Eragon and Arya hugged each other. Neither knew much about Alalea. Eragon had salvaged and old chart from Oromis' house, and he ha d been uncertain for some time whether the elves who had charted the journey had been certain of their art.

But here they were, at the old home of the elves, Alalea. It was sunset when they finally reached the shore. They slept on the boat, and Eragon's guards took turns on the watch. It was unwise to camp for the night on an unknown shore. Eragon had been told by Oromis that it may have been the Urgals that had forced the Elves to make the journey to Alagaesia, and there might even be Raz'ac. The Urgals, while friendly in Alagaesia, would probably not be so here. At least not yet.

''Well we've finally made it love,'' Eragon told Arya.

''Yes,'' she said. ''We're here!''

I don't know about you two, but Laufgroenn and I are going to explore the mainland for food and to get a general idea of things, said Saphira to the pair.

****

On the shore, the four scouts were observing the ship with interest from the bushes.

''Captain, what do you think of their intentions?''

''Well what do you think,'' the Captain asked the young scout. ''You might occupy this position sometime.''

''I don't think we can make any assumptions yet, let's wait until we can be sure.''

''You're right, but I don't want any Raz'ac back on this island. We don't want that scum here again.''

Then the four scouts saw Saphira and Laufgroenn fly off the ship.

''That does it,'' said the Captain. ''They've either got Letherblaka or some other weird monsters out there. You boy, inform the King. We don't want them landing!''

This post has been edited by Professor Blagden: 02 April 2009 - 04:33 PM

[S1lver Hand]

I have the pleasure of being the first person replying! I've accompanied your 4th book since the beggining it was awesome, and this one is already starting to be just as great or even better, so dragons are only present in Alagaesia? and didn't Eragon I made a trip to Alalea? so they should know what dragons are, and not confuse them for lethrblakas or any other type of creature? just asking, its greatly written, really keep doing the good work:D

[Fusaichi Pegasus]

I have the pleasure of being the first person replying! I've accompanied your 4th book since the beggining it was awesome, and this one is already starting to be just as great or even better, so dragons are only present in Alagaesia? and didn't Eragon I made a trip to Alalea? so they should know what dragons are, and not confuse them for lethrblakas or any other type of creature? just asking, its greatly written, really keep doing the good work:D

OK, about Eragon the 1st, I never knew that he returned to Alalea on Bid'daum and if it's true, then ignore it please!

And thanks for being a longtime fan!

@ Everyone: Oh and at the introduction at the start, I am joking, it does seem really big-headed I know! Though you can request a copy of the book if you wan. I wasn't joking about that bit!

[jsquared0905]

I think Silver Hand is getting confused with the canon story and my fanfic. In my fanfic Eragon I did not die in Alagaesia but returned to Alalaea, when Glaedr was giving a history lesson in mine, so no Eragon I did not leave for Alalaea..

And me likes the prologue!

This post has been edited by jsquared0905: 12 February 2009 - 06:04 PM

[sunfest13]

Prologue be good.
Ooh, another kingdom that doesn`t like Eragon so much. yet... Please don`t make it another Inheritance though, I`d like to see Eragon allied with the government this time.

[Eragon Brommson]

Good start. Loved your Book 4. One problem- People on a different country probably wouldn't speak the same language.

[Eragons fricai]

This chapter was so short. You need to make the chapters longer and more detailed. Will you complete this story? It seems a bit interesting.

[RaginCajun]

Loved your book 4.

This chapter was so short. You need to make the chapters longer and more detailed. Will you complete this story? It seems a bit interesting.

I agree and even your book four was less than 30 chapters, i think, but with the action of 70. It was like watching all the cool parts of Die Hard without the build up. Fortunately for me, I love Die Hard. Good Story keep doing what you do.

This post has been edited by RaginCajun: 13 February 2009 - 12:50 AM

[Eragons fricai]

You should make tis story longer than your previous one. Also, you need to develop i a bit, too. And please don't make every chapter an "action-filled" one.

[jky1995]

I saw some spelling mistakes but then I can see the plot line unraveling. Please update, for I can tell this is a cliff-filled book.

PS. I know this is a fan-fic but aren't the Ra'zac from the homeland of humans?

[Fusaichi Pegasus]

Hmm, I thought that they were the ones that drove the elves out. I must read Eldest again. But as you said it is a fan fic. Let's say that they co-existed in Alalea as well.

Yes the prologue was very short, seeing as a wrote it in 5 minutes. This one has a lot more ''meat'' in it, though it's mostly dialogue.

Chapter One

Saphira was returning from her flight over Alalea with Laufgroenn, when she saw the soldiers forming up behind the woods just off the shore. She couldn't exactly determine what race the soldiers belonged to, but their intentions were obvious.

Eragon, she called, Soldiers are forming up just behind the woods on the shore.

But before she could say anything else, she was spotted.

''Letherblaka!'' one man hysterically screamed.

This is bad, she thought. If they think I'm a letherblaka, chances are they will attack the ship. I must find a magician or someone among them to convince that I'm not what they think.

Laufgroenn, she said, help me find a magician among them!

She and Laufgroenn, scanned the crowd mentally, looking for a magician. However they had to stop on several occasions , to dodge fire from the archers. Finally Laufgroenn sensed a magician.
Saphira quickly made contact. She broke into the magicians mind.

Why are you attacking us, she queried. What have we done to give offence.

You are an abomination. You are our greatest enemies!

I am growing tired of this. Though I am new to this land, and it's people, it is usually seen as the height of bad manners to attack newcomers to a land, without first informing them as to what customs they are breaking.

The fact that you exist is reason enough.

Well, thanks. I'll make sure not to be born next time! What did dragons ever do to you? We are native to Alagaesia. As far as I know not a single dragon ever set foot here.

Hah! So you re-brand your race? Give it a new name? Well your kind has been pillaging our land under a different name for generations.

And what might that name be. I'm so curious.

Letherblaka, the magician seemed to spit mentally.

Letherblaka! Saphira spat. So that foul brood has been giving you trouble too! Egg breakers! We exterminated them in Alagaesia, I myself killed two of the, and the partner of my heart killed their spawn, the Raz'ac. The greatest day of our lives! And now you have the cheek to compare me with that scum? How dare you! She fumed.
As she dodged another volley of arrows, the magician replied, But you look like letherblaka.

Saphira replied, Can letherblaka do this?

And she spat flames, as did Laufgroenn.

The magician replied awed, I never heard of that in any myth or legend. I will speak with my General. Perhaps you may aid in our struggle.

It would be my pleasure, Saphira said. You have no idea what the Raz'ac and the Letherblaka did to us.

****

Eragon, Arya and his body-guard were preparing to defend the ship, when Saphira spoke to him.

We have reached an arrangement, some men will arrive to take you, Arya and your bodyguard to the General. You are to be treated as honoured guests, due to my diplomatic skills.

Why thank you Brightscales, he replied, I am indebted to your skills. I will remember to ask for a royal leg of oxen at dinner, on your behalf.

Make that a hind leg. The front legs have no meat

I shall remember that, O partner of my heart.

Do I detect patronization?

Perhaps, perhaps not. I never know what you think!

Your impossible!

Yes but you do love me don't you?

Obviously! Though I don't know why some days. Be alert, the men are approaching.

And that ended that conversation.

This post has been edited by Professor Blagden: 13 February 2009 - 10:34 AM

[S1lver Hand]

I might be confusing but I really thought I'd seen it being mentioned in another place but well this story is still great that i don't care, nice new chapter very good, I didn't see any mistakes and I think your skills are really great, this book as alot of potencial to surpass your last one:).

[Fusaichi Pegasus]

I might be confusing but I really thought I'd seen it being mentioned in another place but well this story is still great that i don't care, nice new chapter very good, I didn't see any mistakes and I think your skills are really great, this book as alot of potencial to surpass your last one:).

Actually you are right, but for the sake of this book they existed in Alalea as well!

I did notice some errors myself, which I have fixed. Problems with the italics for the most part.

[rockrox]

You are my hero .
On topic... glad you are back. I'm sorry if I didn't post in your earlier story, but I was not yet a fully fledged member. I would read every update though! Continue with the good work, and if you have the new people kill Saphira I will go homicidal.

[tom1]

Awesome, your doing a sequal. The first two chapters are great. The only mistakes I could see were that a few sentences were lacking italics, but that was all.
Keep it up, I look forward to reading more!