Posted 25 February 2009 - 01:15 AM
For the sharpen, try first doing Edit>Copy Visible, then Edit>Paste, then Layer>New Layer. Make sure the new layer you just made is selected and then try the sharpen. Also, use the sharpen under Filters in the menu, NOT the sharpen tool. Hope that helped (I've forgotten a lot about GIMP it's been sooooo long).
The font you used looks a lot better. And for the future, try not to get your text all huddled up in a corner (like the "Clorox" text in the other version. Doesn't look too great. The way you did it now looks a lot better.
REAAALLY nice job on those edits you did for a beginner.