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Albtraum For those who don't speak German, thats nightmare.

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Posted 21 February 2009 - 04:37 PM

Well, as is usually the case, I got bored. So I made this. Unhappy with the text, but otherwise I like it.





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Posted 21 February 2009 - 04:51 PM

Hehehe, I remember using that render. (Remember Darkness?)

This isn't your best, Wra1th, to be honest. Or maybe its just because I don't like this style. You might want to try moving the whole focus to the side a bit (rule of thirds and whatnot), it *might* help. Maybe some fancy smudging fun would help.

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Posted 22 February 2009 - 06:10 AM

QUOTE (Wra1thHunter @ Feb 22 2009, 03:07 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Well, as is usually the case, I got bored. So I made this. Unhappy with the text, but otherwise I like it.




You should really stop centering your focals, they really ruin the compo, Make bad focals and kinda spoil the flow too. The sig is alright, but the smudging isnt particularly good, neither is the text. You should just remove it instead of keeping it, making the sig look bad. Try emphasizing the lighting more, making it brighter, instead of leaving a boring gray mist thing. The depth isn't too great either, but lighting will help that. Increase the contrast a tad too. Try to get depth and some features into your smudging, and some more detail into it.



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