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Posted 26 February 2009 - 04:46 AM

Hey there here is some of my stuff (It doesn't all rhyme):

Sanctuary

Scorn of mother,
Feverish sweat,
Forbidden lover,
Damn regret,

Addictive pain,
False attraction,
Naively sane,
A simple distraction,

Truth surreal,
Disturbed reality,
End of ordeal,
Lonely mentality,

Alluring light,
A siren song,
Feels so right,
Must be wrong,

She gives me sanctuary,
With her passionate desire,
And hearts burst into fire,
The stunning beauty of such,
Can never lose its touch…
With me and sanctuary.


Colour

It would be so much easier if feelings just didn't exist sometimes.
If every feeling had its own colour and if they somehow,
Suddenly disappeared the world be so dull to look at
It would all be a patch of grey
And life wouldn't have any colour because nobody would ever love or hate,
Because there is no such feelings.
I don't want to feel hurt and I don't want to feel lonely,
But I still want to be able to feel happy and that I'm needed sometimes.
So who am I to say that life would be easier without feelings?
I who hate just to feel more love...
So we need them, More than we can imagine.
I hope the world stays colourful.


Dark Side

My life is a life where families are destroyed
Where everyone close to you leaves you
They leave you alone and vulnerable
Alone to face the oncoming traffic and challenges of life
Why must I forever be trying to cross this road
Every time I try a semi-trailer of destruction looms in my way
Forcing me back into the darkness in which I live
But from the darkness I can see a glimpse of the other side
Its a beautiful side where I'm loved and families function
The side of life I've always desired and admired
Its the brighter side of this road of life
But I'm stuck here on the dark side... I hate it here.


End Of Faith

Lying face down to hide the light
Finding shelter in the dark of night
Heretic voices stalking you
Memories past are seeping through
Heavens fallen down from enlightenment
Only through him shall you be sent

Now flying on the wings of faith
The end isn’t so hard to see
I'll take this fall from grace
As the end of faith consumes me.


The Immortal Smile


Its been too long since I seen your smile,
Choke on the thought and swallow the vile,
Dread the days and savor the nights,
How can I live within those lights,
I'll remain in these shadows until your return,
Time after time, when will I learn?
How can I live when I must survive,
The immortal smile will never die.


When They Come To Me

My heart was battered, My soul was lost,
Torn right out and thrown to the frost,
You touched my heart and found my soul,
Pieced me togethor and made me whole,
Now that I'm with you my path is now clear,
There's nothing in this world that I must fear,
There is no way to say thanks for saving me,
From the embodiment of darkness I use to be,
Words can't describe the feelings I must hide,
But when the words come to me in you I'll confide.


Thoughts?
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Because the struggle goes on even when your not there.

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Posted 26 February 2009 - 12:17 PM

Great poems. I liked the 1st and last best. It seems like some of them are related i.e the dark side and the last one, almost like a journey.=].
Love to see some more:)
We must decide for ourselves what is right, and what is wrong. What to believe , and what not to believe. And learn not to impose our views on other people. For, if they haven't come up with them theirselves, how can they possibly believe it?

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Posted 26 February 2009 - 01:52 PM

Ahh, boons, these are amazing. Sanctuary was great, as usual. But they're all very nice...when did you write all these?

Float like a butterfly.

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Posted 27 February 2009 - 04:51 AM

Thank you guys!
Here is another:

Joker

When their lives are done and gone,
Who will be the one to carry on?

I've played with people's lives,
Now what does that make me?
Am I still that guy who strives,
To prove that's only who he use to be?

I have manipulated and controlled,
I've changed their lives for the worse,
This guilt I will forever have to hold,
I'll bear it all the way until the hearse,

When my life is done and gone,
Who would even want to carry on,

Hearts broken and lives destroyed,
These seeds of rage will be employed,
I am the wrong, and I am the right,
Darkness I need, there is no light,

I spill my heart and soul for you,
No longer the anger you once knew,
Changing won't undo what is done,
A little bit of peace is what I've won.

When ours lives our done and gone,
We find that we were the Joker all along.

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Posted 28 February 2009 - 01:37 AM

They are very good!
Loved them.

My favourites where:
Colour,
Dark side
&
When they come to me.
Awesome poetry cant wait to read more.
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Posted 28 February 2009 - 01:40 PM

I liked colour the best


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Posted 01 March 2009 - 04:52 AM

Once again, thanks guys.

Well here is another poem:

Dear Father

Father, Father,
Ignored my call,
Another lover,
Betrayed us all.

Father, Father,
I feel so alone,
Another mother,
Dad, come home.

Father, Father,
I must complain,
Lying above her,
You bring me pain.

Father, oh Father,
I respect you not,
We can not recover,
You only had one shot.

Father, Bloody Father,
You're gonna regret this,
Soon you will discover,
The moments you've missed.
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Posted 04 March 2009 - 06:47 PM

Here is a song I wrote guys:

Creatures (In The Dark)

A worthless filthy liar,
Has but one desire,
To destroy and maim,
Victims of his little game,

Lies made out of barbed-wire,
Tear apart those who inspire,
All to gain a peice of fame,
Undeserving of such acclaim,

He brings news of such dire,
Leaving behind the hellish fire,
Is he the one who is to blame,
When we are just the same?

But in the dark,
We are no different,
We'll build an ark,
For all us creatures,


You may think you aren't a monster,
But trust me honey, your amongst em',
Deceit runs rampant on these streets,
Upon our sinful souls it surely feeds,

Colton, the liar you're now our master,
Was it worth causing such disaster?
Treacherous ways leave you incomplete,
Because, you now sit alone in that seat,

The city of evil is in need of a pastor,
Colton only you can apply the plaster,
Now is your only chance to undo and delete,
The creatures we've become at the hands of defeat,

Because in the dark,
We are no different,
We'll build an ark,
For all us creatures,

In the dark,
We are no different,
We'll build an ark,
For all our futures,

In the light,
We are so different,
We built that ark,
But not for creatures.

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Posted 07 March 2009 - 01:21 AM

Your soo goooddd!

Very touching,

Hope to see more soon ).gif

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Posted 30 May 2009 - 12:39 AM

Please, Boons, can we have some more?

Float like a butterfly.

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Posted 17 June 2009 - 07:54 AM

QUOTE (Phee @ May 30 2009, 01:39 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Please, Boons, can we have some more?


Sure thing here is my latest poem:

Scars XII

Accompany me into the maelstrom,
The mighty maelstrom of existence,
Leave all behind-be nothing but numb,
Walk the line between fact or fiction,

Sear my skin-take the pain within,
Pass that parcel that's hot as sin,
Step inside of my twelve scars,
Of memories lost and bottled jars.

Anger subsides into total anarchy,
Blind in one eye-an untold story,
Blurred vision makes it hard to see,
These twelve scars are not of glory,

The greatest story never told,
Of the lives lost and souls sold,
Of a lonely child's twelve scars,
And his alien future-up in the stars,

"Please come inside, son, it is awful cold out."
"In a moment, mother, im watching death sprout..."
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