[Wra1thHunter]

Well, I like it, definitely an improvement. C&C, and I might actually work on it after.

This post has been edited by Wra1thHunter: 03 March 2009 - 01:26 AM

[Ally]

I like it. You've blended it really nicely and although the background it simple, it looks great. The only problem I have with it is that it seems devoid of color. You might want to enhance the blues a bit. Otherwise, it's awesome.

[Wra1thHunter]

How's this?

[Inheritance Maker]

How's this?

I'm horrible with graphics so take this with a grain of salt. I don't see a noticeable difference between the first one and second one. I thought the hair might be a little bluer but my eyes are playing tricks on me. I like them both. What is she a character from? Is she original?

Note: While typing this, I scrolled down and both pics/graphics were practically on top of each other. The background has more of a bluish tint, from the duller brown/grey in the first one right?

I am using a 37" 1080p LCD and I can just barely make out a color difference. I'll have to run a color test on the LCD later and see if it's running right.

[otterwarrior16]

It's a nice sig but overall it's boring. The render is plain and is just kind of there. It's nothing to do with the style, I like the smudged background and such, but it needs more life.

[Inheritance Maker]

It's a nice sig but overall it's boring. The render is plain and is just kind of there. It's nothing to do with the style, I like the smudged background and such, but it needs more life.

As a guy I disagree. The undercleavage is inspirational and gives insight to what the character thinks about herself.

[Quoth the Raven]

^ O_O That sounded mildly creepy.

I like the flow and the way the render is placed, but to me it seems like the colors of the render a bit too closely matched with the colors of the background, making it seem, yeah, kind of colorless I guess. I think maybe it is because the color of her hair is reeeeeally close to the background right behind it. I dunno, I'm not very good at visualizing larger changes.

[kingfloat]

I like it, but it seems plain, as if something is missing.
Try adding another character facing the opposite way in the background.

[Inheritance Maker]

^ O_O That sounded mildly creepy.

Sorry you feel this way as it is not my intention. Art has to be appealing. It needs to invoke a feeling for it to be worthwhile to others. Anime or fantasy, when it's introduced to the masses, is beautiful when it can conjure thoughts of violence or sexuality. His character is a sexual being in some kind of position of power.

I like the flow and the way the render is placed, but to me it seems like the colors of the render a bit too closely matched with the colors of the background, making it seem, yeah, kind of colorless I guess. I think maybe it is because the color of her hair is reeeeeally close to the background right behind it. I dunno, I'm not very good at visualizing larger changes.

[fastflame304]

As a guy I disagree. The undercleavage is inspirational and gives insight to what the character thinks about herself.

^Thank God, I was waiting for someone to say it xP

[Wra1thHunter]

Um, well, while its nice to have responses in my topic, its somewhat not what I had in mind when I created this tag. I'll play around with the colours, see if I can come up with something to spice it up.

Bam! Check it out. I added a bit of a distortion to see if I could spice it up somewhat.

This post has been edited by Wra1thHunter: 03 March 2009 - 01:26 AM

[Inheritance Maker]

Um, well, while its nice to have responses in my topic, its somewhat not what I had in mind when I created this tag. I'll play around with the colours, see if I can come up with something to spice it up.

Bam! Check it out. I added a bit of a distortion to see if I could spice it up somewhat.

You know where I stand but I have a question. Are her hands glowing with some kind of power? Seems like there's a .....glow.

[Quoth the Raven]

Ahh it looks really great now! Now it stands out a lot more . . . although it's quite a bit darker than the original, maybe you could try making the overall blue tone lighter? This one looks good, but it's definitely different in mood than the original.

[Wra1thHunter]

You know where I stand but I have a question. Are her hands glowing with some kind of power? Seems like there's a .....glow.

Its the lighting effect I created. They weren't originally there.


Anyways, here's the updated version.

[Quoth the Raven]

Ooh, that looks great! Love it!