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#1 User is offline   Ally Icon

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Post icon  Posted 08 March 2009 - 11:20 PM

The Queen
By: Ally


The Characters

The Royal Family
The Queen – Ally (The Daughter of the exiled King; current ruler of Inherforum)
The King – Mike (King of Inherforum; former King of Shurtuga)
The Prince – Rinion (Cousin of the Queen; current heir to the throne)
Duchess of Beckinsale – Hadha (Wife of the Prince; closest friend of the Queen)

The Queen’s Council
Royal Advisor – Arthryn (Responsible for the removal of Lord Sogemplow; secretly covets the cown)
High Chancellor – Charles (Brother of Lord Sogemplow; desperately seeks to avenge the former King)
Spymaster – Stormfire (Newly appointed to the position; Completely devoted to their Majesties)
Captain of the Guard – Lady Goldylocks (Head of the Inherforum army; Long-time friend to the Queen)
Vice Chancellor – Risstalle (Henchman of Charles; covets power and wealth)
Assistant Spymaster – Tim (Assistant to Stormfire; Loyal to Arthryn)

The Queen’s Personal Staff
Queen’s Ladies-in-waiting – Anya, Pixel, allera (Assistants the Queen)
Queen’s Royal Guard – Vincent, SB, Vaevictis, Pix, Ancalagon (Responsible for the Queen's protection)

Court of the RogueSpammers
King of the RogueSpammers – kingfloat (King of Thieves; most wanted man in Inherforum)
RogueSpammers – bucket, CuLDud, DarthFutuza, Loki84, BTF (Kingfloat's most trusted friends; Theives)


Prologue

In the year 1999, King Henry IV of Inherforum was overthrown and executed along with his family. The only survivor managed to flee to the neighboring Kingdom of Shurtuga. This removal was dubbed The Dark Revolution by the evil Lord Sogemplow, who claimed the throne after King Henry's death. For ten long years, Inherforum was subject to the illegitimate rule of a madman. Chaos reigned, and hundreds of people were senselessly killed.

Hope was kindled, for rumors that the true heir was alive and living in Shurtuga were soon surfaced. An ambitious (and mysterious) woman named Arthryn secretly amassed an army, using soldiers provided by the nobility still loyal to the old King. In 2009, Lord Sogemplow was successfully removed from power and executed. The old King's sole surviving heir, Princess Allyson, was crowned Queen of Inherforum. With her, she brought the King of Shurtuga, Mike, thus unifying the long rival Kingdoms of Shurtuga and Inherforum.

However, a dark shadow soon spread across the land. Whispers of a terrible plot by those loyal to Lord Sogemplow surfaced, which threatened both the lives of the Monarchs and the stability of the Kingdom. Worse still, those behind the plot have not yet been found and some believe that they never will be. The task of keeping the Kingdom together has fallen to the young Queen. She must now discover the loyalties of those around her, and attempt to destroy the threat to her Kingdom before it destroys her.

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Posted 08 March 2009 - 11:35 PM

The c-9999 (etc...etc...) - I just can't do it. Its to aweso

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Posted 09 March 2009 - 09:06 AM

Abuse of C-levels by a mod? Do I report this or not?
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Posted 09 March 2009 - 02:25 PM

Hmph. I should warn you for backseat modding. p.gif

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Posted 09 March 2009 - 04:39 PM

Awesome Ally ).gif I love it. Can't wait to see how this goes ).gif
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Posted 09 March 2009 - 04:42 PM

Can I get a mention because you secretly love me lots?

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Great work by the way, you have talent for this sort of thing ).gif
No spelling mistakes ).gif
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Posted 09 March 2009 - 05:10 PM

QUOTE (Ally @ Mar 9 2009, 02:25 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Hmph. I should warn you for backseat modding. p.gif


What? I'm just saying, if we're going to get threads closed for not C-leveling our works, don't the people closing the threads at least have to set a good example?
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Posted 09 March 2009 - 07:25 PM

^ No. lol.gif

Love it ).gif Can't wait to see how this turns out!
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Posted 09 March 2009 - 08:32 PM

Teehee, nice work, Ally. I can feel that this is going to be the beginning of an epic IF story. I have no complaints.

Alright, maybe, I do, but just one.... How could you mention Vincent and not me?? Why?! I thought what we had was special! cry.gif

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Posted 10 March 2009 - 09:54 AM

I agree with Ally... the C level should be OVER 9000! XP

Really good work... looking forward to the next installment.


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Posted 14 March 2009 - 08:44 PM

5/5 Can't wait to see how this is gonna end!
If anyone is interested. I updated my art thread.
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Posted 14 March 2009 - 08:47 PM

Gah, I'm actually going to do a re-write on chapter one. I wrote it when I was bored, and without any actual plot in mind. Now I have one, and I kind of want to change some things. I think what I will do is replace Chapter 1 with a list of main characters, and then make a new post for the new Chapter 1! Hopefully I'll get that done tonight or tomorrow so I can start on Chapter 2.

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Posted 15 March 2009 - 11:22 AM

Wow, cool story, I can't wait to see what will happen.

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Posted 15 March 2009 - 05:41 PM

Well, you've got me interested with your draft of chapter I, I think it would've done fine as an intro, and then you could get into the main plot in the next chapter, but I'm not writing your story. ).gif Great work so far.


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Posted 15 March 2009 - 09:38 PM

That was like so awesome! Post more! Amazing!

Very interesting plot line too. Keep it up!
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