[Invisible Ink]

So here are three of my most recent sketches that I didn't bother with shading

...yay?


Ok, this one is of two of my characters, Kyrom (the guy) and Remmy (the girl). Remmy is wearing his shirt...for some random reason. I originally intended the picture to just be Kyrom and originally he had a shirt on, but I was experimenting and I liked how his shirtless-ness came out. And the reason Remmy is there is because I have problems drawing people's butts when they're sitting and I had no idea what to do with his right hand and arm. So then I drew in Remmy and this is what it turned out.


This one is just of Remmy with four dragon wings. And I can't stand looking at it because I hate her lips and her eyes are too big and her hands are too small. I do like the wings though. So that's why I posted it.


And this final one is of Serafina (girl) and Crowley (guy), also characters of mine but they're based off of my friends. This was actually the first time I drew Crowley and I'm quite pleased with how he came out...except for his leg. I wished I would've shaded his calf. Oh well, too late now. I don't even have it anymore. I also wished Crowley didn't look like Satan. Seriously, all he needs is some horns and a tale, but it was the first time I've ever attempted an afro too. And then I hate the way Serafina's hair came out. I drew her one time and absolutely loved her hair but now I can't replicate it and I'm mad at myself. I do like the way they're holding hands though. I thought that came out pretty well. Not so much for their other hands though...

So that's what I've got for now. I'll probably dig up some other drawings and scan them later. Critism welcome and whatnot.

[Bartimeaus]

As of right now, the only thing that seems off to me are the eyes in the top two, it looks like you were going for a realistic approach, but the eyes ended up being a cross between the animu eyes, and human eyes. I can give redlines on them if you'd like.

That bottom one, however, really caught my attention. Overall, the anatomy (bar the wings) is really really good! The guys trench coat is amazing, and believable. The eyes here are a tad too large, scale them down just a tad.

There's my bit.

[Invisible Ink]

Thanks Any help would be awesome.

[Creme Fraiche]

This one is my favorite.
The only problem I see are Kyro's right hand. The fingers are kinda off.

This one is just of Remmy with four dragon wings. And I can't stand looking at it because I hate her lips and her eyes are too big and her hands are too small. I do like the wings though. So that's why I posted it.

I like how the wings came out too.
Nice job on putting the folds in her clothes.

I like the hands on this one. This is really good, but it feels like some details are missing.

Keep updating! You've got some good stuff.

[Old Rosebud]

This one is just of Remmy with four dragon wings. And I can't stand looking at it because I hate her lips and her eyes are too big and her hands are too small. I do like the wings though. So that's why I posted it.

I love this one. I like the Dragon wings. Nice details!

This post has been edited by HeaRtiE: 10 July 2009 - 09:23 PM

[Invisible Ink]

Thanks for the comments guys. I'll see about having some more up in the next couple of days, but I'll have to fix my scanner first. I'd rather use that then post photos.