Posted 26 March 2009 - 04:47 AM
Indeed you're right about the left, you could just clone out some more wall, or simply use a different part of the image, her hand replicating looks odd.
Second part is the text, this is an elegant tag, meaning a light weight font is best here, yours is too heavy and showy.
Aside from the odd left and the pretty poor text, the tag itself is really really nice, some nice lighting going on there, and effective use of space.
Freedom and America and Justice and America and Opportunity and America and America. ...In America.