I can't help with shading much, because it looks like you did this on the computer. Any art done on the computer wouldn't be my area of expertise. Not like I'm an expert at anything though, hah.
Anyways! I think I can help you with the hand. (I'm assuming the palm is the part of the hand facing us) That pose, first off, is sort of hard to pull off. Maybe it's just me, but trying just right now, I can't place my middle finger over the other without forcing it with my other hand. I can put it behind, but not in front. Why don't you try?
The only other thing I have to say is that the pinky may be too long.
Can't wait to see more!
This post has been edited by Pixel: 10 April 2009 - 01:48 PM