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Posted 16 April 2009 - 01:04 PM



C&C please.
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Posted 16 April 2009 - 01:14 PM

It is good, however, I find that the bright colors are a bit to contrasting, and the fact that Shadow is slightly transparent is not helping it. Good pic though!
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Posted 16 April 2009 - 01:30 PM

Thanks, yeh I agree. I'll do a v2 tomorow.
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Posted 16 April 2009 - 09:52 PM

The only thing that I think should be different is to dim the bright colors a little. And add a little less pink. It kind of makes him look like a girl in some way.

Over all it's very nice. I like it a lot.

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Posted 16 April 2009 - 10:00 PM


I'd lessen the brightness as to call more attention to the render but still not have it completely stand out. But a good job none the less.
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Posted 23 April 2009 - 03:26 PM

This and you Mario one are both very good.
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Posted 25 April 2009 - 02:32 AM



v2.
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Posted 27 April 2009 - 01:15 PM

Oooooo, me like. The shards of colored glass look better.

The figure is a little hidden now, like he's not important. Try removing a little bit of the color in from of him and brighten him up a tad.

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Posted 27 April 2009 - 01:44 PM

Ya ok. I'll do v3 tomorow if I have time. I'm going to watch Xmen tonight xD.
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