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Diving new sig

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Posted 02 May 2009 - 05:19 AM

Slightly different style, hope you like. C&C please.

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Posted 02 May 2009 - 09:23 AM

Awww, he's so cute! *Ahem* Moving on to critique....

I like it a lot, but the line going up from the text is a bit odd. I keep thinking the polar bear is in a cage because of it.

The big bubbles on the right are a little too dark, they stand out too much.

Overall it's really nice though, good job.

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Posted 02 May 2009 - 10:07 AM

I like it since it has polar bears!

Anyway....it's nice, the bubbles on the right are a bit off. Other than that I love it!
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Posted 02 May 2009 - 10:43 AM

I like the first one. p.gif And I don't think the font fits very well with the theme of the picture... but over all, I really like it.
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Posted 02 May 2009 - 09:54 PM

My eyes really seem to go right to the bubble things. I know that isn't what you wanted.
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Posted 03 May 2009 - 04:00 AM

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Posted 03 May 2009 - 10:46 AM

The bars of light are either too bright, or go the wrong direction. In the present one, there isn't a defined focal point, since when it might've been the head, the light streaks over it to an undefined area. Maybe if they went the other way, to go over the body of the animal . . .?

Also the color of the bubbles is kinda off, it's a bit too green for the colors of the rest of the sig, so it might look a bit better if you made it more navy-blue and then lightened it.
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Posted 03 May 2009 - 01:08 PM



Like so?
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Posted 04 May 2009 - 12:25 PM

I like the text, the line coming from the "g" is good ^_^.

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Posted 04 May 2009 - 12:42 PM

I really like it, but the only problem I see is the line coming from the "g."

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Posted 04 May 2009 - 06:35 PM

The line coming from the "g" is a nice touch, but it seems kinda . . . intrusive? Also maybe you should darken the right side a little, say by a radial gradient?
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Posted 05 May 2009 - 01:58 AM



That dark?

And mtbanger, what did you mean by print clearly?
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Posted 05 May 2009 - 02:02 AM

I was talking about the font, but on second thought, maybe not.
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Posted 05 May 2009 - 01:29 PM



Needed something there.

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Posted 07 May 2009 - 05:04 AM

Hmm in the last one I dont like the lines above its body. Also, given the direction of the light beams, Its face seems to dark. Maybe add glow slightly to the face or change the beam direction?? The beam direction just doesnt match. Its REALLY light on the back when its dark on the front, and yeah, it should be the other way around.
Its a nice idea though, and the colours are really pretty.
Did you use this for a SOTW comp by any chance?? Maybe I'm imagining things....

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