Posted 08 May 2009 - 08:36 PM
It's nice, but it looks a lot like it's just a render stuck on top of a background - there's too much contrast between her and the sky. It would be a lot better if you could do something to it to blend the girl into it more. I agree with Pix about the pole too, it does a good job filling up space, but it's kind of distracting. Either blend it too, or try to get rid of it. I think it would be cool if you gave it more contrast over the butterfly and less over everything else - it would give the sig a clear focal point, and make the whole composition seem sharper.