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Posted 31 May 2009 - 02:57 PM

Even as I sit here.
I still don’t understand.
How circles fit in squares
And dogs chase cats
And how jumbo shrimp is jumbo.
And how you can’t slam
A revolving door.
And how life isn’t fair
And how we are all equal
And how money matters.

Perhaps all is for naught
And the world makes no sense
But people still seem
To try and make things fit.
But for the life of me
I still can’t see
How all this can be.
It defies all logic
Cause all is not as
It seems.

I still can’t see
How everything is possible
And the future isn’t set
What cookie jars have to do
With politics
And how the late birds
Still get worms.
How a throne is still a chair
And how you can surf the net
I guess nothing really makes sense

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Posted 01 June 2009 - 06:12 PM

That was very good and humorous. I loved it. thumbsup.gif
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Posted 02 June 2009 - 09:51 AM

It was an English assignment.

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Posted 29 July 2009 - 11:30 AM

That was pretty good. It points out a lot of strange things.
My favorite line was
QUOTE
What cookie jars have to do
With politics

You should post more poetry.
"It's hard to walk straight
when the day is late
And the horizon is as far
as you can see

It's hard when you're told
That you're getting old
and the world isn't
what it used to be."

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“Calm.” Mr. Jenkins repeated flatly. “I’m perfectly calm. Oh, I’m as relaxed as I can be with an elephant floating by the window.” The last few words were increasing in volume until they were shrieks punctuated by violent stabbing motions at the window.
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Posted 18 August 2009 - 03:30 PM

Vey nice. I liked it thumbup.gif
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