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#1 User is offline   Nahruk Albatroz Icon

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Posted 09 June 2009 - 04:07 PM

I have recently started writing poems .... enjoy.



Despite the light

Why is the end just the beginning?
I cant stop the death i reave, Despite the light.
When does the pain end?
No one can stop me, Despite the light.
When i once had friends, who do I kid?
Now friend turn foe.
When is the end?
If its my fate, why cant i stop this misery?
When is the Armageddon?
Despite the light.
Iam the Harbinger of the End, Despite the light.
I say when the end is, I say Its Now.


A day in High school.


Left, right.
Left, right.

No matter how i walk,
i will always trip down you.

Right, left.
Right, left.

No matter how i step,
i always fall up you.

Its a talent most High-schoolers know.

Syndrome


Whats black is White.
What did i Say?
When does the turrets End.
Flippin' nuggets of DOOM!
Why cant i stop?
It annoys every one.

This post has been edited by Nahruk Albatroz: 11 June 2009 - 03:37 PM

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Posted 05 August 2009 - 04:45 PM

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
The stairs, right?
I didn't get the last one and I definitely didn't get the first one, but the second one was really really hilarious.

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This post has been edited by witch168: 05 August 2009 - 04:48 PM

"It's hard to walk straight
when the day is late
And the horizon is as far
as you can see

It's hard when you're told
That you're getting old
and the world isn't
what it used to be."

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“Calm.” Mr. Jenkins repeated flatly. “I’m perfectly calm. Oh, I’m as relaxed as I can be with an elephant floating by the window.” The last few words were increasing in volume until they were shrieks punctuated by violent stabbing motions at the window.
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Posted 24 August 2009 - 02:21 PM

I didn't get either of them but the 2nd one was funny.
*If you reveal your secrets to the wind you should not blame the wind for revealing them to the trees*
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*Don't follow your dreams; chase them.*
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Posted 28 August 2009 - 01:40 AM

Haha, they're all very cute and fun to read. A nice start! In the next poem you write, try to make it richer by adding extended metaphors, similes, or imagery. This will make your poems more substantial, and thus, transform them into works of beauty. Keep writing!
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