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 Jun 14 2009, 08:51 AM
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 Lieutenant Pali- Commanding since 1869  Group: Members Posts: 5,450 Joined: 25-June 08  |
 I'm not too happy with it, but my photoshop trial just ran out and well... C&C appreciated. --------------------  "I go to my fathers, in whose mighty company I shall not now feel ashamed." Theoden "All we have to decide is what to do with the time that is given us." Gandalf "Blessed are those who have not seen and yet believe." Jesus |
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Jun 14 2009, 03:41 PM
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 Disfigurement! Call a wahmbulance! Group: Members Posts: 3,124 Joined: 6-October 08 |
I think it's pretty good, but I think you should get rid of the bluriness on the right side. I also think you should lighen up or remove the black in the corners. Other than that, t's really good.
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Jun 15 2009, 02:02 AM
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 WHEEERE'S THE BEEF? Group: Members Posts: 3,627 Joined: 15-December 07 |
The border thing, or whatever it is, on the left side and the bottom looks pretty awful, you should remove it. The splatter on the bottom left too looks bad.
She's not blended very well, and the whole sig looks pretty low quality. The effects are pretty nice, but the lighting and depth is like... bad, so yeah, work on those two. It's completely flat, try burn/dodges and a little blurring too, and try to make light fall on her from that patch behind her, it'll help blending too. You should have given her a more underwater look, with seaweed and stuff, and maybe added some bubbles to make her look more like she's underwater. That said, it's one of your better ones, keep working and try checking out some tuts, or even downloading some .psds and .xcfs for ideas on new styles and effects. --------------------  母は、吸う！私は日本語を読むことができるとすることはできません |
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Jun 15 2009, 12:49 PM
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Lieutenant Pali- Commanding since 1869 Group: Members Posts: 5,450 Joined: 25-June 08 |
QUOTE She's not blended very well, and the whole sig looks pretty low quality. Yeah, the render wasn't perfect. But i've scaled it down a bit; hopefully that will help. QUOTE but the lighting and depth is like... bad, so yeah, work on those two. It's completely flat, try burn/dodges and a little blurring too, and try to make light fall on her from that patch behind her, it'll help blending too. I've done a bit of that; is it better noew? Or does it still need a bit more? QUOTE You should have given her a more underwater look, with seaweed and stuff, and maybe added some bubbles to make her look more like she's underwater. XD...She was meant to be flying...she is one of the witches from the Golden Compass... QUOTE That said, it's one of your better ones, keep working and try checking out some tuts, or even downloading some .psds and .xcfs for ideas on new styles and effects. Thank you, and yeah, this one and my Iorek one was a new style I was trying to develop a bit. New and old for comparison. Old: New: 
This post has been edited by Palagrin: Jun 15 2009, 12:51 PM -------------------- "I go to my fathers, in whose mighty company I shall not now feel ashamed." Theoden "All we have to decide is what to do with the time that is given us." Gandalf "Blessed are those who have not seen and yet believe." Jesus |
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Jun 15 2009, 06:09 PM
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Disfigurement! Call a wahmbulance! Group: Members Posts: 3,124 Joined: 6-October 08 |
I actually like the first one better. I think it looked better without the brightness by her hair.
-------------------- Broke off a piece of my knuckle, so I won''t be on much. Thanks for the support. |
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Jun 15 2009, 06:10 PM
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 Nevermore! Group: Members Posts: 3,543 Joined: 31-January 09 |
In my opinion it would look a little better if you darkened the lower left, since it looks a bit strange with the multiple light sources.
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Jun 15 2009, 06:32 PM
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 IT'S A MIGHTY DRAGON Group: Members Posts: 261 Joined: 21-April 09 |
I think is looks more like "Swimming". The brightness in the center is a bit annoying. It seems empty somehow.
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Jun 15 2009, 06:57 PM
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 Shish Kababy Group: Members Posts: 479 Joined: 13-December 08 |
I like it alot, but I agree with EC, she looks like she's swimming....and also that blurriness could be removed.....it seems a bit out of place...other than that, AWSOME
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Jun 16 2009, 11:33 AM
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Lieutenant Pali- Commanding since 1869 Group: Members Posts: 5,450 Joined: 25-June 08 |
Here's and updated version:
 -------------------- "I go to my fathers, in whose mighty company I shall not now feel ashamed." Theoden "All we have to decide is what to do with the time that is given us." Gandalf "Blessed are those who have not seen and yet believe." Jesus |
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