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Kinda wanted a crit on this... SOTW thingy.

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Posted 18 June 2009 - 01:43 PM

I couldn't get a real crit on this in the SOTW discussion, and rather than create more spam I decided to just post it so I can see what people think.

So, c and c please. D.gif



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Posted 18 June 2009 - 05:03 PM

One major improvement in my opinion would be to make the background black, although with your limited software I don't know if you can. D.gif
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Posted 18 June 2009 - 05:18 PM

Yes, definetely.

Not bad. Simple, short and sweet.
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Posted 18 June 2009 - 05:21 PM

Why don't you download GIMP? It looks pretty basic as they have said. But good.
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Posted 18 June 2009 - 05:22 PM

It's not particularly basic. It greatly depends on the person, of course.
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Posted 18 June 2009 - 08:32 PM

I like it, but I think it would look better with a black background, like others have said. The inner legs fade out a little bit though, so you shoud work on that.
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Posted 19 June 2009 - 11:34 AM

QUOTE (Quoth the Raven @ Jun 18 2009, 03:03 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
One major improvement in my opinion would be to make the background black, although with your limited software I don't know if you can. D.gif
Meh, it would take me a while but it can be done.


QUOTE (pmurphy21 @ Jun 18 2009, 03:21 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Why don't you download GIMP? It looks pretty basic as they have said. But good.
Because my dad has me working on offline artwork and not graphics. Which is cool, mosaics are awesome.


QUOTE (pityonmurtagh @ Jun 18 2009, 06:32 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I like it, but I think it would look better with a black background, like others have said. The inner legs fade out a little bit though, so you shoud work on that.
Hmmm, don't know if I can do anything about that. I'll have to try.

Thanks guy for the crit. I reaaaaaaallllllly appreciate it.

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