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 Jun 18 2009, 01:43 PM
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 Eldest: long book is long  Group: Members Posts: 3,541 Joined: 3-October 08  |
I couldn't get a real crit on this in the SOTW discussion, and rather than create more spam I decided to just post it so I can see what people think.
So, c and c please.  
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Jun 18 2009, 05:03 PM
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 Nevermore! Group: Members Posts: 3,543 Joined: 31-January 09 |
One major improvement in my opinion would be to make the background black, although with your limited software I don't know if you can.
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Jun 18 2009, 05:18 PM
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 This PowerUp Dance is Suggestive  Group: RPG Moderators Posts: 6,717 Joined: 18-May 07 |
Yes, definetely.
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Jun 18 2009, 05:21 PM
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 Disfigurement! Call a wahmbulance! Group: Members Posts: 2,673 Joined: 12-January 09 |
Why don't you download GIMP? It looks pretty basic as they have said. But good.
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Jun 18 2009, 05:22 PM
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This PowerUp Dance is Suggestive Group: RPG Moderators Posts: 6,717 Joined: 18-May 07 |
It's not particularly basic. It greatly depends on the person, of course.
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Jun 18 2009, 08:32 PM
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 Disfigurement! Call a wahmbulance! Group: Members Posts: 3,124 Joined: 6-October 08 |
I like it, but I think it would look better with a black background, like others have said. The inner legs fade out a little bit though, so you shoud work on that.
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Jun 19 2009, 11:34 AM
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Eldest: long book is long Group: Members Posts: 3,541 Joined: 3-October 08 |
QUOTE (Quoth the Raven @ Jun 18 2009, 03:03 PM)  One major improvement in my opinion would be to make the background black, although with your limited software I don't know if you can. Meh, it would take me a while but it can be done.QUOTE (pmurphy21 @ Jun 18 2009, 03:21 PM) Why don't you download GIMP? It looks pretty basic as they have said. But good. Because my dad has me working on offline artwork and not graphics. Which is cool, mosaics are awesome.QUOTE (pityonmurtagh @ Jun 18 2009, 06:32 PM) I like it, but I think it would look better with a black background, like others have said. The inner legs fade out a little bit though, so you shoud work on that. Hmmm, don't know if I can do anything about that. I'll have to try.Thanks guy for the crit. I reaaaaaaallllllly appreciate it. -------------------- |
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