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A child of two worlds star trek

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Posted 20 June 2009 - 04:31 AM

Well, I'm kinda proud with this one!



C&C please....

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Posted 20 June 2009 - 07:48 AM

I'm not a particularly big fan of Spock, or ST at all for that matter, but I really like this. I especially like the black that is blended onto him. I think his cheek looks a bit to shiny, it looks plasticy almost. I think it should look a bit rougher, if you know what I mean.

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Posted 20 June 2009 - 07:59 AM

I don't really like this one, you've had better.

The stock is rendered awfully, and blended badly too, and the focal needs more definition, my eyes were attracted to the ship, the dude and to the planet thing.

It's also really low quality, especially the ship thing and the background. The contrast is weird, and it looks like you've used posterize on it. The effects you've used are weird too.. Sorry, but you've had waay better.

Try reading some tutorials for new effects and styles, and try using renders, not stocks you've rendered yourself for now.


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Posted 20 June 2009 - 01:38 PM

Okay, I removed spock.

Changed various things.


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Posted 22 June 2009 - 08:32 PM

Maybe if you put a quote on the right side from the movie or the series?
"Accept the challenges so that you may feel the exhilaration of Victory"

"Part of Leadership is staying ahead of your people, in a dogfight, that's called lead-turning. If you aren't lead-turning, you're behind, and the enemy can swoop up behind you, you're dead."

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Posted 23 June 2009 - 12:49 AM

What quote, seeing as spock is gone, it can't be "you are a child of 2 worlds..."
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Posted 23 June 2009 - 07:09 PM

How about "To boldly go..." ?
"Accept the challenges so that you may feel the exhilaration of Victory"

"Part of Leadership is staying ahead of your people, in a dogfight, that's called lead-turning. If you aren't lead-turning, you're behind, and the enemy can swoop up behind you, you're dead."

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