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Love Potion- Love is a dangerous art C+C ASAP!!!

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Posted 25 June 2009 - 03:04 AM

I did a text and non-text version. I need C+C quickly because it needs to be done by a certain date, which is in the next couple of days, I'll have to check when exactly.......





These ones I can do without the writing too.









The hand looks kind of blurryish, but that was the original pic, and it looked dodgy sharpened.
Which looks best, and what should I fix?

C+C pretty please!!

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Posted 25 June 2009 - 01:42 PM

Well, I love the colour! Just the white bits around the glass might be a bit too bright. I like the last one; the sparkly bits that go into the "love potion" make it look more magical.

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Posted 25 June 2009 - 01:47 PM

There is something about the left that I don't like....It's just one shade really, with very slight variation....The text isn't correctly placed either, IMO, either it should be smaller, or along the arm?

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Posted 25 June 2009 - 11:59 PM

I might put soime reds in on the left side, I cant until I get home though, Im at school now so I cant.

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Posted 26 June 2009 - 12:03 AM

I think the hand looks good blurry. It focuses more on the drink. Beautiful!! I like the very last one with writing. Try it without to see what it looks like?
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Posted 28 June 2009 - 02:04 AM

Ok, more versions.









What do you think? Which is best out of all including above?



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Posted 28 June 2009 - 09:32 AM

I still think it needs more defined red on the left.

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