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Adurna Shrrg's Poems Several poems and haiku Rate Topic: ****- 2 Votes

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Posted 29 June 2009 - 10:41 PM

These are some haiku i've made, based mainly on emotions. A few are about nature.

Various Haiku

Dawning dreams draw near
Stories whisper in my ear
Eyes wide, I’m still here

Fierce winds on the cliffs
Now loneliness engulfs me
Bitter salt tears come

Wild flowers blooming
Roses tremble in the wind
Beauty in nature

Sunshine bright and proud
Warms my soul from the darkness
A time of great joy

Cold as the high North
Rage looks out from strangers’ eyes
Ice slides down my spine

Pride in every look
My heart skips a fragile beat
Love flows in my veins

Sweat runs down my face
Terror makes me cower down
Stillness is torture

Passion inflames me
His solemn eyes a strong hold
Fire is in my heart

A sharp stinging pain
Sadness is the enemy
Deep in dark shadows

Exhilaration
A powerful sensation
It drives me forward

If you wouldn't mind, please state which one, if any, is your favorite.

This post has been edited by Adurna Shrrg: 03 August 2009 - 10:21 PM

Hey all, I'm back from the dark side, their cookies weren't very good. (Don't tell them I said that.)

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Posted 06 July 2009 - 02:00 PM

The last one is my favorite, Haiku's are some of my favorite poems, keep writing stuff like this. :]
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Posted 03 August 2009 - 10:24 PM

This next poem was written when I was about nine or ten years old, so it is a little bit childish, but still very true. My cousin committed suicide, and he did it just before Christmas. This was kind of a gift to his mom.

The Sad But Happy Story

There once was a joyful song
With spirits unbounded I long
For a time and place
Where I could see your face
But alas it is not to be
With you in the circle around a tree
We are there, yet you are not
And as I look towards that vacant spot
Another Christmas without you
My joys today are few
Then my gaze fixes upon the star
I am reminded, you are not far
A tear stained smile, can go a long mile
The sad but happy story


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Posted 05 August 2009 - 12:17 AM

Darkness

Soft whispers in the wind
Caresses so gently
Nothing is seen, but felt

Weight presses against the eyes
There is nothing to see
And still the wind whispers

A howl tears the air
Terror is apparent
Nothing is seen, but heard

Gently is the baby lifted
Clothed in soft fabric
The wind brushes against uncovered skin

Supple hands lift him
Held against her bosom
Nothing is seen, but tasted

Slowly it occurs
Never will he see
His mother, just a tender whisper

Perfume is strong
A comfort in a barren land
Nothing is seen, but smelt

An acceptance comes
Life will go on
Nothing is seen, but still he lives.

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Posted 11 August 2009 - 03:20 PM

i love that last one the most but all of them are great. You should write more. And by the way, I love the thing about people and slinkies in your sig. ).gif So funny!

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Post icon  Posted 11 August 2009 - 03:32 PM

I don't think The Sad but Happy Story is childish sad yes childish no.
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Posted 11 August 2009 - 03:34 PM

I like the seoncd one a lot!

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Posted 17 August 2009 - 04:12 PM

AS.... I.. you... That Sad and Happy Story is SO SAD... I'm seriously half-crying now... Excellent., And of the first batch of haiku's my favorite's the first.

The darkness one is kind of random, but the last stanza's are soothing. ^_^ All in all, you're pretty good!
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Posted 03 September 2009 - 09:08 PM

I haven't visited this in awhile, but since some people apparently like it, here are three more. The first one is still about my cousin, to his mom, and I wrote it three years after he died, and my sister loves it. The second one is a revised version. The just random.

The Time is Passed to Grieve

The time is passed for grief and tears
Years have gone, my eyes are clear
My heart still aches, still cries, still mourns
Christmas comes, its nearly here
The pain stays, it does not leave
I thought the time was passed to grieve
To see my family and my friends
Perhaps my heart can still mend
I won't forget, but I will let go
The time is passed to grieve


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The time is passed for grief and tears
Years have gone, my eyes stay clear.
Yet my heart still cries for him
My faith in life begins to dim.
The pain brought up, it will not leave
I thought the time was passed to grieve.
To see my family and my friends
Perhaps one day my heart will mend.
Yet something in my soul is slow
To forget and to let go.
Still I tell myself each night
The time is passed to grieve.


Untitled (I made it up in class when I was bored.)

Dusk arrives, a light on high
Sets ablaze the navy sky
Darkness falls, so called night
A time of peace or dark delight
Dawn arrives, a splash of gold
Time for those both brave and bold
Day draws near, the sun does rise
Banishing fear and doubts and lies

This post has been edited by Adurna Shrrg: 03 September 2009 - 10:05 PM

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