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 Jul 3 2009, 01:34 AM
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 Don't ask Arthryn for titles. It pisses her off.  Group: Members Posts: 1,109 Joined: 28-March 08  |
Hello. Haven't made one of these in a while, so I thought I'd give it a go. I made this out of a sudden inspiration...was meant to be a different render, but I couldn't find it.
 I don't really know what to say to this one. I'm not too sure it's good. I know the text stinks. :/ Please leave some C&C. Edit: Just noticed it's WAY too bright. I'll try and fix that. Here's a darker V2: 
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Jul 5 2009, 02:02 AM
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 Shish Kababy Group: Members Posts: 472 Joined: 18-October 08 |
Ooh very nice. I do think hat it would look good with a different text, like a type of script/cursive or something. Also something abut her middle seems off. Did you smudge it?
--------------------  If he catches me staring, at least I know that he's looking back. 99.9% of me knows I have no chance with him, its the .1% that keeps me going. |
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Jul 5 2009, 11:56 AM
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Don't ask Arthryn for titles. It pisses her off. Group: Members Posts: 1,109 Joined: 28-March 08 |
Thanks
.gif) Not at all... when I scaled it it kind of blurred in spots. It was at least 4 times that size before I scaled it. -------------------- |
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Jul 5 2009, 11:58 AM
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 Lieutenant Pali- Commanding since 1869 Group: Members Posts: 5,450 Joined: 25-June 08 |
I would get rid of the text all together.
And the render is still too light IMO. --------------------  "I go to my fathers, in whose mighty company I shall not now feel ashamed." Theoden "All we have to decide is what to do with the time that is given us." Gandalf "Blessed are those who have not seen and yet believe." Jesus |
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Jul 8 2009, 12:20 AM
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Standard Issue Farmboy Group: Members Posts: 94 Joined: 7-February 07 |
I agree with Palagrin, the render is pretty bright.
The text, if you want any, should probably be smaller and at a lesser opacity. Where it is right now just detracts from the sig, in my opinion. Just my 2 cents --------------------  (>O.o)> EXPLOSIONS! <(o.O<) "Reaper is either a pimp or just a horrible person." - Arthryn I dislike my brother... |
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Jul 8 2009, 01:06 PM
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Lieutenant Pali- Commanding since 1869 Group: Members Posts: 5,450 Joined: 25-June 08 |
And the font needs to change, it doesn't really fit. Or move the text.
-------------------- "I go to my fathers, in whose mighty company I shall not now feel ashamed." Theoden "All we have to decide is what to do with the time that is given us." Gandalf "Blessed are those who have not seen and yet believe." Jesus |
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Jul 9 2009, 06:21 AM
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 Disfigurement! Call a wahmbulance! Group: Members Posts: 3,124 Joined: 6-October 08 |
I agree with Palagrin, move the text. I rather do like the font though.
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