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Posted 07 August 2009 - 04:57 PM


I'm trying some different things, but it isn't drastically changed from my normal style
C&C would be much appreciated, please and thank you.

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Posted 07 August 2009 - 06:30 PM

Personally, I think it would be nice of the text was a bit bigger, put off into the unused space on the left, and maybe had some subtle effects around the text.
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Posted 07 August 2009 - 07:57 PM

I really like this, though, it may have something to do with the fact that I love FFVII. lol.gif

Anyways, I think it would look better if the orange/gold stripe on the right was gone. Also, a bit more contrast in the black would look good.

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Posted 07 August 2009 - 09:33 PM

The text stands out a bit too much; you can probably make it much bigger and more translucent, or change the color to a brown-orange. Overall it looks pretty good, although perhaps the bright orange in the upper left can be carried throughout the image, since in such a small area it's distracting.
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Posted 07 August 2009 - 09:52 PM

Where did you get the background?
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Posted 07 August 2009 - 10:49 PM

QUOTE (pityonmurtagh @ Aug 7 2009, 10:52 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Where did you get the background?


lot's of smudging and displacing, on top of a linear gradient.I can't believe I missed a spot when erasing on my C4D, I'll get rid of that orange streak a bit later. and I'll try some of your suggestions on the text, thanks guys.

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Posted 07 August 2009 - 11:12 PM

Actually, I kind of like that orange streak. Maybe if you colorized the gold vein-looking things in the background to match the orange?
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Posted 07 August 2009 - 11:15 PM

I'm not sure how I'd do that though, anyway, I'm off to bed, this will have to wait for sunday.

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Posted 07 August 2009 - 11:48 PM

I agree with Quoth, it has a certain...boldness, that I like.

You've inspired me to make one of Zack, BTW. I'll post it in a bit.
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