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Posted 11 August 2009 - 01:05 PM

Giratina: The Misunderstood Pokémon

The night air was moist and cold around the Spring Path. Bidoof happily slept with their families in dens, while groups of Hoothoot scoured the sky, searching for food. All was calm and quiet, at least so it seemed.
A small Ralts jumped up and cooed mysteriously at a rumbling sensation in the ground. It shivered in fear as a mighty roar pierced the air, causing Pidgey and Skarmory to squawk in panic. The Ralts was standing in front of the entrance to the Spring Path, ducking low to the ground, shaking all over. A Skarmory flew over to the little pokemon and threw its wing over the Ralts, protecting it from a giant, six-legged pokemon that leaped over them as if they weren’t there. The colossal pokemon roared once more and leaped into the air, changing forms into a very narrow and more aerodynamic shape, flying off towards Stark Mountain.
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The pokemon flew endlessly into the night, flying higher than the mighty Rayquaza, roaring and crying out into the night air. It thought deep about its true purpose on earth, why it was there, and how it can help to keep the pokemon world a great place to be.
Many hours passed and it was nearly dawn when the mysterious pokemon landed on the very tip of Stark Mountain. It sagged down onto its stomach and sighed. It thought a lot about itself, and who it was. It didn’t have many friends, if any at all, and it wished it could belong.
Why am I even here? I don’t feel I have much of a special purpose at all, and I’m just a big, powerless pokemon…

The pokemon shot its head up as it heard a calm growling sound from up above. It was the legendary pokemon and god of all dragon types; Rayquaza. It came down beside the other pokemon and rested softly on the rocky mountain top, coiling itself into a ball with its head resting on its thick body.
What seems to be the problem Giratina?
Giratina seemed shocked that this pokemon knew its name, and even more so that it was willing to listen to it speak.
Well, I have been thinking about my true purpose here on earth, and I’m really feeling blue…I have little friends, and not many pokemon like to see me coming, they either faint, scream and run, or panic and dive into their homes or in the nearest hiding spot.
Hmm, that is a problem. But I would be more than happy to be your friend.
Rayquaza smiled sweetly and wrapped its tail around Giratina’s shoulders.
Thanks Rayquaza; that means a lot to me.
No problem. As for your other problem, you do have a purpose, and that is being the god of ghost pokemon, and just showing others that you are really a nice being, and I am truly glad to be your friend.
Giratina felt a foolish smile tug at its lips, also blushing. Rayquaza giggled and looked out over the towering mountain. Giratina looked at the moon and saw a deer-like pokemon with a strange, long head and yellow coloured bone-like linings around its stomach.
Do you see that pokemon in the moon?
Rayquaza looked as well, and only caught a small glimpse of it before it turned away, and vanished into thin air.
Yeah, I did see it. I wonder what it was.
Beats me, it’s probably just something weird looking for attention.
Well, I hope you enjoyed our chat and I will see you around.
Aw, you’re leaving already?
Yes, I have to go, I need to check on Kyogre and Groudon, make sure they aren’t fighting again, you know how they are.
Ha, yeah I guess that’s a good idea. Well thanks for this talk and I will definitely be seeing you!
Sounds good, toodles!
Rayquaza gave a roar and flew up and off into the distance, spiraling around like a swimming snake. Giratina let out a long sigh and got to its feet. It smiled at the thought of what Rayquaza had said, and he was pleased that he had a true friend and wanted to make more friends. Turning to the east, Giratina launched itself off the giant rocky ledge and flew back to the Spring Path.
The same little Ralts was sitting outside of Giratina’s home, waiting for it to show up. Giratina landed right in front of the Ralts with a massive thud and a blast of wind which made the Ralts topple over. Giratina gasped and grabbed onto the tiny pokemon, saving it from a nasty fall down a small ledge. Giratina sat the pokemon gently in its hand and smiled adoringly.
You are a very cute little pokemon, and it’s nice to see you too.
The Ralts cooed happily and hugged Giratina on its massive snout, purring and murmuring to itself. Giratina felt a tear come to its eye as it realized it made another friend.
If you ever need help, little one, just call for me, and I promise to protect you anyway I can.
The Ralts jumped up and down and clapped its hands together, which activated the move; charm, and a serge of happy energy burst through Giratina.
Thank you little one. I must go now, so you be good and I’ll see you soon, Ok.
Ralts nodded and Giratina placed it gently back on the soft ground. Turning away, it heard the Ralts start to cry behind it. Slowly turning back around, Giratina picked up the little Ralts and took it with itself, into its home.

The End

Giratina is a very powerful pokemon, it can have an absolute max HP of 505, which is incredibly high. In this story, Giratina was shown who it really was and where it belonged among the many pokemon in the world. I hope you enjoyed this short story and there will be more to follow very soon!

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Posted 11 August 2009 - 01:25 PM

Well, I'm a huge pokemon fan I absolutely love the dragon-types (I use to use nothing but dragons in my party) but I have to say that this story isn't as good as your others. You made it seem as though Giratina and Rayquaza had genders when you mentioned their friendly affection and when Giratina blushed. Neither of these dragons have genders (awkward). Also, the dialog was very weird and very free-spirited. It was almost as though they were capable of being humans in pokemon bodies, kinda like Mystery Dungeons. That kinda bothered me.

And I don't know why Giratina is being called "god of ghost-types". I know he's ghost but he's also dragon. But I suppose that's just me being nit-picky.

The storyline was good, but it was just everything I said above that got to me. I really want to keep reading what you come up with next. But do you think that a "Pokemon Mystery Dungeon" story would be cool and might be associated with this?


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Posted 11 August 2009 - 05:32 PM

QUOTE (dragon_god @ Aug 11 2009, 02:25 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Well, I'm a huge pokemon fan I absolutely love the dragon-types (I use to use nothing but dragons in my party) but I have to say that this story isn't as good as your others. You made it seem as though Giratina and Rayquaza had genders when you mentioned their friendly affection and when Giratina blushed. Neither of these dragons have genders (awkward). Also, the dialog was very weird and very free-spirited. It was almost as though they were capable of being humans in pokemon bodies, kinda like Mystery Dungeons. That kinda bothered me.

And I don't know why Giratina is being called "god of ghost-types". I know he's ghost but he's also dragon. But I suppose that's just me being nit-picky.

The storyline was good, but it was just everything I said above that got to me. I really want to keep reading what you come up with next. But do you think that a "Pokemon Mystery Dungeon" story would be cool and might be associated with this?


With the blushing, it was more to show how they were feeling about the compliments, I know they don't have genders, I just gave them an appearance like two good buddies tongue.gif. You are right, this story was a bit of a doozy of mine lol. But I'm posting a new one D.gif I hope it's better. Mystery Dungeon could very well be a good idea, but I gave them feelings like I did with Thorn and Shruikan in my other stories. All in all, I'm still glad I have fans, and I enjoy reading any comments on my stories so I can take in all the advice I can and help make my stories better.
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Posted 11 August 2009 - 11:50 PM

Ah, it was just my pokemon fan...ness... coming out. Don't take any of that to heart. I really enjoy reading your stories, especially the pokemon ones. I just came across the Battle of the Mini Legendaries and I subscribed to it so I can keep track of it. I love reading pokemon and watching anything that has to do with them. I know I'm 18 and too old for pokemon but who cares what other people think? I don't.

I really think that you should do a Mystery Dungeon story. Make it long and interesting with tons of emotions, comedy, and action and suspense, etc.. If you did, I would become your biggest fan! Maybe we could work together on it while I'm still working on Uprising. We'll both have fun with it. With your writing skills and my story lines, we could really make something. Just a suggestion.

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Posted 12 August 2009 - 10:09 AM

QUOTE (dragon_god @ Aug 12 2009, 12:50 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Ah, it was just my pokemon fan...ness... coming out. Don't take any of that to heart. I really enjoy reading your stories, especially the pokemon ones. I just came across the Battle of the Mini Legendaries and I subscribed to it so I can keep track of it. I love reading pokemon and watching anything that has to do with them. I know I'm 18 and too old for pokemon but who cares what other people think? I don't.

I really think that you should do a Mystery Dungeon story. Make it long and interesting with tons of emotions, comedy, and action and suspense, etc.. If you did, I would become your biggest fan! Maybe we could work together on it while I'm still working on Uprising. We'll both have fun with it. With your writing skills and my story lines, we could really make something. Just a suggestion.



Thank you so much. That would be a great idea. I will write a mystery dungeon story and it will be amazing..I hope lol. I'm glad you enjoy them, that makes me feel good haha.

And hey, I play pokemon too and I'm 16. I have pokemon Emerald and Diamond stuart.gif and I play them like 24/7 lol.

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Posted 12 August 2009 - 11:31 AM

Sweet. This could be an original writing/general fan-fiction type of thing. We could make this elaborate story that will really capture everyone's imagination and attention and give Pokemon the respect that they deserve. I'd be more than happy to assist you in this. The only thing is: I have to focus on my story too and I have college right around the corner. But I'll do whatever can and devote whatever time I do have to write this Mystery Dungeon story with you. It'll be good. Trust me.

And I don't really feel bad about playing Pokemon anymore. I had Diamond but I seem to have misplaced it and now I can't find it and transfer anyone over to Platinum. I've stopped playing because I've had so much to do around here but I still have it.

I figure if we use the same basic storyline from the original Mystery Dungeon games, then this shouldn't be too difficult. I still have the basics memorized from when I used to play them all the time. We could have recruitment, bosses, special events, and we can be free with pokemon dialog. It'll be fun.


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Posted 12 August 2009 - 11:38 AM

I agree with dragon_god. You need more detail. Anyways keep it up. It's also awkward that my favorite pokemons are Girantina and Rayquaza. Heehee I would love to see more from you!


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Posted 12 August 2009 - 11:42 AM

Dragon-types are awesome, aren't they? There should also be a latios/latias story. Those 2 are by far my favorite dragons in Pokemon. The way they were portrayed in the movie made me cry every time I watched it. It still does. It's just so emotional.

But one story at a time.


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Posted 12 August 2009 - 05:58 PM

QUOTE (dragon_god @ Aug 12 2009, 12:42 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Dragon-types are awesome, aren't they? There should also be a latios/latias story. Those 2 are by far my favorite dragons in Pokemon. The way they were portrayed in the movie made me cry every time I watched it. It still does. It's just so emotional.

But one story at a time.


lol, I actually have a few story ideas, and I loved the Latios/Latias movie.

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Posted 12 August 2009 - 06:08 PM

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Posted 12 August 2009 - 09:15 PM

QUOTE (ThornPython4 @ Aug 12 2009, 04:58 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
QUOTE (dragon_god @ Aug 12 2009, 12:42 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Dragon-types are awesome, aren't they? There should also be a latios/latias story. Those 2 are by far my favorite dragons in Pokemon. The way they were portrayed in the movie made me cry every time I watched it. It still does. It's just so emotional.

But one story at a time.


lol, I actually have a few story ideas, and I loved the Latios/Latias movie.


Cool. You must have a lot of time on your hands. Are you going to come up with a story for every group/pairing of pokemon (latios/latias, Palkia/Dialga, Groudon/Kyogre, etc.)? If you did, you'd have a lot of stories to write. Here's the cool thing: you can link them all together in a single story in a Mystery Dungeon story (I know I'm kinda pressing it; I'm sorry) and take care of it all in one go.

The 5th movie was just absolutely amazing. It truly was a brother/sister movie that really showed care and love towards the other. I just wish my relationship with my sisters would be like that.


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Posted 13 August 2009 - 11:38 AM

QUOTE (dragon_god @ Aug 12 2009, 10:15 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
QUOTE (ThornPython4 @ Aug 12 2009, 04:58 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
QUOTE (dragon_god @ Aug 12 2009, 12:42 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Dragon-types are awesome, aren't they? There should also be a latios/latias story. Those 2 are by far my favorite dragons in Pokemon. The way they were portrayed in the movie made me cry every time I watched it. It still does. It's just so emotional.

But one story at a time.


lol, I actually have a few story ideas, and I loved the Latios/Latias movie.


Cool. You must have a lot of time on your hands. Are you going to come up with a story for every group/pairing of pokemon (latios/latias, Palkia/Dialga, Groudon/Kyogre, etc.)? If you did, you'd have a lot of stories to write. Here's the cool thing: you can link them all together in a single story in a Mystery Dungeon story (I know I'm kinda pressing it; I'm sorry) and take care of it all in one go.

The 5th movie was just absolutely amazing. It truly was a brother/sister movie that really showed care and love towards the other. I just wish my relationship with my sisters would be like that.


Haha, well siblings can be tougher to handle in real life LOL. I think I may do that.

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Posted 13 August 2009 - 12:21 PM

Yeah. Why can't we all live in a pokemon world? That would just be the coolest thing.


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Posted 13 August 2009 - 01:26 PM

Pokemon world would be awesome... Except there's gonna be someone challenging you all the time, and the stress would be overwhelming. wallbash.gif


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Posted 13 August 2009 - 05:15 PM

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Pokemon world would be awesome... Except there's gonna be someone challenging you all the time, and the stress would be overwhelming. wallbash.gif


That is true, though I would love to become either a Kyogre, or a Charizard
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