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Paint the sky with stars

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Posted 20 August 2009 - 08:30 AM

Yeah, I ripped the name of an Enya album....

I know it's arya, but I couldn't resist not making a sig with the stock. Even though it's quite simple, I actually like it.



C&C please, but I might not be able to reply for 10 days or so. But plaese do comment.

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Posted 20 August 2009 - 01:58 PM

The image is gorgeous, but I'm not too sure of the lines. Also the BG doesn't really fit with Sienna, it's too sharp.
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Posted 23 August 2009 - 09:27 AM

Okay, thanks. I'll see what I can do.

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Posted 23 August 2009 - 09:43 AM

I'm staring more at the background than at Arya.

Also, if you look closely, there appear to be some lines on the render's face. That really subtracts from the render's quality. See if you can fix them.

Also, I only saw the text when I thought; 'OK, time to comment on the text'. That might be my bad vision, but I don't think the text stands out enough.
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Posted 23 August 2009 - 11:12 AM

I agree about the text. It's too transparent, and the color doesn't really fit with the rest of the background. It's too bright.
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Posted 23 August 2009 - 11:40 AM

I think the text should be slid over to next to Sienna's neck, otherwise it feels like you have to look around. The scanlines don't really look all that good, although it kind of unifies the whole thing. Maybe if they weren't as opaque?
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Posted 23 August 2009 - 11:48 AM

I'd suggest up to the right of her eyes. And smaller. That could look good for the text.
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Posted 23 August 2009 - 11:58 AM

I think it would look odd in the center of the sig.
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Posted 24 August 2009 - 12:39 AM

QUOTE (Quoth the Raven @ Aug 23 2009, 05:40 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I think the text should be slid over to next to Sienna's neck, otherwise it feels like you have to look around. The scanlines don't really look all that good, although it kind of unifies the whole thing. Maybe if they weren't as opaque?


To the left of her neck?

The scan lines are pretty transparent. I'll see how much more they will go.


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Posted 24 August 2009 - 07:42 AM

Maybe where Palagrin is?
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Posted 24 August 2009 - 07:00 PM

I meant the right. Oops. I need more sleep.
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Posted 02 September 2009 - 01:13 AM

Okay, I'm back from hols, so:



Tadaa!

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Posted 02 September 2009 - 09:14 PM

Yeah, that's what I meant. =P It looks pretty good, maybe you should chop off a little of the right?
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Posted 03 September 2009 - 01:21 AM

You mean to crop it?



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