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Posted 21 August 2009 - 09:07 AM

A product of my possible insomnia. I got the birds thing from a wallpaper I had and the background and the moon and the stars was mostly from scratch with the help of a cloud brush and the dodge/burn tool. It feels like it's missing something but considering that I could barely type my name properly when I made this, I think it's not too bad. I may need to fix the wings a bit.

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v.2 (Just added a border, but you can't really see unless you hare using a dark background.)

v.3



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Posted 24 August 2009 - 04:01 AM

It looks pretty cool, in my opinion! I like the text (it's pretty interesting font) but maybe you could try making it a little bigger and closer together. You nailed it on the wing-fixing thing, and that one of the bird's wings falls inconveniently along the edge of a cloud and makes it look a little like it's attached to the cloud =P

Otherwise, it's quite gorgeous xD (this comment was a by-product of my insomnia too!).

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Posted 24 August 2009 - 04:23 AM

To be honest, the second and third versions look a bit empty, I think. The first one's better because of the dark band in the middle, but the white border suited it.

I think the best would be the first with a border. It's pretty, but a bit.. simple? Empty?
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Posted 25 August 2009 - 11:13 PM

I think the sky is to light. The moon looks too dim. I think that is all I have to say. Pretty cool.
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