[The Last Shurtugal]

Hi all.

I am new to artist's hangout, and do not know how to post a picture from my PC..

Somebody help!

This post has been edited by The Last Shurtugal: 04 September 2009 - 04:31 AM

[The Last Shurtugal]

Here it is:

[Emily]

This drawing lacks creativity, and the shape is just wierd. The scales lap over each other in a wierd way, along with its shape. The neck should flow more into the curve on the jaw, and the jaw line shouldn't be so straight like that. It would be nice if you had more of the dragon in the picture, because the colors on the left isn't enough.

Good parts! Well, the flame of the fire is interesting. Did you computerize that or what? I like the red and orange of the blend. The teeth aren't bad, but they need some work. Just those lines of teeth aren't enough.

Sorry if I destroyed it with critic .

[The Last Shurtugal]

The whole thing is computerized..

Are you not supposed to use computers?

[Palagrin]

If your using paint, I wouldn't...xD

You can use computers, but it is much harder. I would do it on paper.

[The Last Shurtugal]

Prblem is, I don't have a printer..I did this mess in PS 4.

[Palagrin]

Why do you need a printer? You just need paper and pencils.

And it's not all bad. it's good for a start.

[Arthryn]

If it's all made in the computer, did you use a tablet? Those make computerized drawing much, much easier. If you don't have one, that drawing must have been painstaking to do. But if you do, then it would be really easy to practice drawing on the computer.

Or if you want to practice on pencil and paper, you can scan or photograph your drawing and put it on the computer that way.

As for some feedback, your main issue is form. Look at real animals and see how their bodies are put together. If you're drawing dragons, pictures of dinosaurs can be very helpful in developing the form of your dragon.

[The Last Shurtugal]

Thanks, I 'll remember all that.

[Undbitr246]

These are unique and talented drawings.

This post has been edited by Undbitr246: 01 November 2009 - 08:10 PM

[Arthryn]

^Um... this isn't your thread, and it's not polite to hijack people's art threads with your friend's art. Your friend can join and post his own art if he wants. You might want to clue him into the fact that gallery sites are around for him to post art, because presenting a piece of art on Youtube is really dumb. Also, I've seen better MS Paint art.

[Undbitr246]

^Um... this isn't your thread, and it's not polite to hijack people's art threads with your friend's art. Your friend can join and post his own art if he wants. You might want to clue him into the fact that gallery sites are around for him to post art, because presenting a piece of art on Youtube is really dumb. Also, I've seen better MS Paint art.

I apologize to the Last Shurtugal. But Arthryn, can you go a little easy on my friend? He's a good guy. That depiction of Al Elric took him hours.

[Arthryn]

I didn't say it was bad, just.. I've seen better, which means I just disagree with your statement that it was the best Paint drawing ever, not me saying the work his bad. Though I did say the presentation of the work (not the work itself) was dumb. So tell him to make a DeviantArt account or something so he's not posting pictures on friggen Youtube. Youtube is great for posting recordings of process, but not finished still pieces.

[Undbitr246]

I didn't say it was bad, just.. I've seen better, which means I just disagree with your statement that it was the best Paint drawing ever, not me saying the work his bad. Though I did say the presentation of the work (not the work itself) was dumb. So tell him to make a DeviantArt account or something so he's not posting pictures on friggen Youtube. Youtube is great for posting recordings of process, but not finished still pieces.

Two things.
1. He forgot to record as soon as he was finished
2.When I said best, I was just complamenting a friend. You're probably (definitely) right.

Let's just stop wasting replies on this subject and ebjoy Shurtugal's art.