Destination
They wander along the never-ending path,
Always wondering who will next exact their wrath.
The horrified voyagers look over their shoulder,
Every step they take, it grows much colder.
They smother their fear, and keep on walking.
Only to find, that their neighbor is the one stalking.
They break rank and run,
But the deed has been done.
The hand of their enemy has struck again,
And it leaves the survivors heart’s filled with pain.
They weed out the spies,
And all the ones who covered the lies.
They reach their destination,
Through luck and determination.
Rest and recuperate,
Else they would regain strength too late.
For the tide is about to turn,
Their enemies have much to learn.
So, this is my first poem in years. I don't know why I wrote it, I just had the poem writing feeling. I would love it if you would tell me what you think.
Thanks,
~S.T.~
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My first Poem in a while, ~Destination~
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Posted 12 September 2009 - 09:51 AM
Hmm its hard to believe that this is your first poem that you wrote in years, its very good if I should say myself.
*If you reveal your secrets to the wind you should not blame the wind for revealing them to the trees*
~Beauty is not so much what you see as what you dream.~
*Don't follow your dreams; chase them.*
With all the pain and suffering you eventually become numb -CC
~Our imagination is the only limit to what we can hope to have in the future~
~Beauty is not so much what you see as what you dream.~
*Don't follow your dreams; chase them.*
With all the pain and suffering you eventually become numb -CC
~Our imagination is the only limit to what we can hope to have in the future~
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