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Posted 10 September 2009 - 05:51 PM

So, when I saw magic as the them, my mind immediately jumped to Harry Potter.

V1

V2: Added Text



V3: Different Text


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Posted 10 September 2009 - 06:40 PM

Get rid of the Harry side and just use the volde render coa it is awesome.

Told you before dude, duel render is bad unless done properly.

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Posted 10 September 2009 - 08:39 PM

Yeah, I agree. They just clash each other. And doing just Volde would be just wicked awesome.

The blending from red to blue just doesn't seem right to me. Harry's face seems to be squeezed and his body isn't really proportioned right. I know I'm not much of a great sig artist (one of THE worst), but those are just some things I can see.
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Posted 10 September 2009 - 08:49 PM

Also, it feels kinda unbalanced, since Harry is smaller than Voldy. If you want to stick with dual render, it might look better if you enlarged Harry, flipped him horizontally, and moved him closer to Voldy (or Voldy closer to him) so their hands are tangent.
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Posted 10 September 2009 - 09:17 PM

QUOTE (Quoth the Raven @ Sep 10 2009, 08:49 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Also, it feels kinda unbalanced, since Harry is smaller than Voldy. If you want to stick with dual render, it might look better if you enlarged Harry, flipped him horizontally, and moved him closer to Voldy (or Voldy closer to him) so their hands are tangent.

I would flip him, but the red cuts off at a right angle, and I don't have the skill to smudge it.

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The blending from red to blue just doesn't seem right to me. Harry's face seems to be squeezed and his body isn't really proportioned right

That's the way it came, so I don't think it's squished.

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They just clash each other

That's the point.


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Posted 10 September 2009 - 09:25 PM

Then you probably should at least put them closer together. The splitting isn't good at all.

The separated text is better IMO, but why does the first one with text have it up so high?
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Posted 10 September 2009 - 09:41 PM








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Posted 10 September 2009 - 09:47 PM

Yeah, they're both better. Harry still looks a little disproportionate, though. Could you flip it around? Other than that, I like it.
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Posted 10 September 2009 - 09:52 PM

I would choose V2, in the others the the text is often unnoticed.
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Posted 10 September 2009 - 10:06 PM

I could flip it, but it'd be diffiicult.
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Posted 10 September 2009 - 10:08 PM

QUOTE (pityonmurtagh @ Sep 10 2009, 10:06 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I could flip it, but it'd be diffiicult.

Don't worry about it, I don't even do graphics, just my observations.
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Posted 10 September 2009 - 10:14 PM

I appreciate the advice. ).gif


Narrowed it down to two.




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