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Who am I, For I am Not New C4D style

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Posted 10 October 2009 - 02:16 AM

I followed a tut for this one...Obviously different renders etc.



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Posted 10 October 2009 - 02:32 AM

I like it. There's not enough focus around the render though.
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Posted 10 October 2009 - 05:05 AM

Yeah, I agree. Tis quite ahrd finding the best C4Ds..

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Posted 10 October 2009 - 06:27 AM

Smaller canvas works much better.

The style is good, but it needs more blended in with it.

Works well as something to build upon.

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Posted 11 October 2009 - 05:51 AM

Hopefully this is an improvement:
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How else could I blend it more?

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Posted 11 October 2009 - 08:27 AM

Newest version is the best. However, the sig is monotone. Try using a couple of different good colours together when making a sig.

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Posted 11 October 2009 - 10:54 AM

I like the new one better, but I think it is still a bit too dark on the left.
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Posted 11 October 2009 - 05:57 PM

I like it, I think the darkness on the left helps with contrast.
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Posted 13 October 2009 - 12:54 PM

Thanks.Bit o' extra yellow in this next one:


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Posted 13 October 2009 - 10:00 PM

Love'n the tunnel effect. Really good compared to the first one in the thread. I think the added yellow needs to be a bit les subtle.

It just needs a text 'n' border similar to this (yeah, I know its not brilliant):



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Posted 14 October 2009 - 12:58 AM

Ummm, you nicked my sig! xD

The border is cool, but I don't really like the text...


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Posted 14 October 2009 - 05:25 AM

The hunk of C4D on the right could be made more opaque and lens blurred, maybe. The bit in the bottom right hand corner.

I'm not really sure what this C4D looks like as a whole, but objects blurred in the forground create pretty cool depth of field. Just be sure not to overdo the bluring.
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Posted 14 October 2009 - 07:29 AM

The border needs to be a tad softer (as in, less contrass evillookingness) and bend the text a bit more to fit the black band properly.
I think its all set after that.
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Posted 14 October 2009 - 11:13 AM



Tis blurred as requested, and it looks pretty cool! Also, border is less 'evil' xD and text is adjusted.
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Posted 16 October 2009 - 11:44 AM

I don't like the new one :S. The blur didn't really help the depth and the text doesn't look too great in my opinion.
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