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Weighing One's Option my first poem on here. Rate Topic: -----

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Posted 19 October 2009 - 11:01 AM

Though i love her with a passion,
Far too many things are clashin'n,

I must be too nervous, no not quite,
Something~else keeps me up all night,

A great poet once said, "Two roads diverged in a yellow wood,
and sorry I , could not travel both."

Is it hesitation? Cowardly perspiration?
Nay! Fear far too tame a word,

And yet, just the right one.
Is it fear that keeps me from breaking a heart, and saving another?

Or is it love?!
Another poet once cried; "Oh! What a tangled web we weave!"

Ever the wordsmith, I look into the sky...
Seeking the next line in this poem?

Or perhaps the next line of a tragic tale,
One of a man torn by love for one, and sorrow for the other,

Regret I've always said is a deadly wine,
Though with it comes much wisdom,
Over the years it wears one down.

I'm really in no hurry to burden myself with a memory i'd glady forget,
Fate however, has other ideas, and i've little time to make up my mind,

Little good it does me, wishing to rewind,
I'm on a fuse, it's live! or snooze!

L.A.W


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Posted 19 October 2009 - 11:21 AM

You're supposed to make a single thread for all of your poetry, RL.

Also, these sound more like lyrics than poetry. Maybe make a chorus for this? ^=^

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Posted 19 October 2009 - 11:36 AM

ahahahah, yeah i figured that out, and some of my other posts are in forums...tongue.gif drat.. thx for the advice, to be honest, much of my work begins as a song, and to me all songs start out as some words that sound good, or clver 2gether. as u have guessed, i am kinda new at this forum thing.. and i wish to God i were musicalluy inclined...but sadly i am tone deaf.
QUOTE (LyriantheFirst @ Oct 19 2009, 12:21 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
You're supposed to make a single thread for all of your poetry, RL.

Also, these sound more like lyrics than poetry. Maybe make a chorus for this? ^=^

James



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