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Here it is.
Gifted by a predator's mind
Blessed by the hunter's kind
Shed your skin and claim your true form
Abandon the one with which you were born
Abandon flesh for a pelt so dark
See the world with a predator's spark
Embrace the essence of your kind
Accept the powerful predator's mind
Capture the form of your wild kin
Take on the form of the spirit within.
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My poem
It rocks, seriously.
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Posted 23 October 2009 - 04:55 PM
Harry Potter doesn't Die!!!!!!! WTF that sucks!
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Posted 24 October 2009 - 01:07 AM
I like the rhythm. But what is it exact;y about? I have an idea but I'd rather hear it from you.
Has a nice pace to it. But the word predator is repeated too many times.
Has a nice pace to it. But the word predator is repeated too many times.
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A part of me cries, a part of me tries
It's an evening of horror, shame on the skies
A part of me cries, a part of me tries
It's an evening of horror, shame on the skies
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Posted 24 October 2009 - 01:38 AM
It's about werewolves, its called shape shifter.
Harry Potter doesn't Die!!!!!!! WTF that sucks!
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Posted 29 October 2009 - 03:09 AM
Nice one!
To me, it seems like a perfect description for Eragon's elf guard, Blodhgarm
To me, it seems like a perfect description for Eragon's elf guard, Blodhgarm
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