[Sir Dystic]

Boredom Is why we cry
No hope to passify
Sit and stare
While the boredom flares

No right to cry
No right to passify
No right to sit and stare
That is why the boredom flares

Up and around
Moving about
The right to laugh and joke
The right to run and poke
The right to play and sing and scream
The right to eat whipped cream

Some we have, some we don't
Some to coem but still some won't

Boredom is why we cry

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Something I wrote whilst waiting for my matsh exam to end...not very good I posted it out of curiosity.

[SnapeandMurtagh ROCK]

Something I wrote whilst waiting for my matsh exam to end...not very good I posted it out of curiosity.

Hi, 0 replies can't be very good for a guy with no self-confidence, can it?!

I like the part- "No right to cry, No right to sit and stare", I think you're saying we shouldn't wallow in self-pity?
It's a nice cyclical thing- boredom is why we cry; crying, etc. is what flares boredom. At least that's how I understood it.

Check out a poem I wrote (sig)

[giorgia]

Boredom Is why we cry
No hope to passify
Sit and stare
While the boredom flares

No right to cry
No right to passify
No right to sit and stare
That is why the boredom flares

Up and around
Moving about
The right to laugh and joke
The right to run and poke
The right to play and sing and scream
The right to eat whipped cream

Some we have, some we don't
Some to coem but still some won't

Boredom is why we cry

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Something I wrote whilst waiting for my matsh exam to end...not very good I posted it out of curiosity.

Hey that's a nice poem. I just couldn't understand what you mean about 'boredom is why we cry'. BUt good nevertheless.

[potter573]

Okay you should probably try to spell some words properly such as "pacify". You do get a bit repetitive with "boredom", in my opinion.

Anyhow it's a simple and nice poem, considering that you wrote it just for fun.

[Blazing Elf]

Yeah I liked the poem also though you just posted it cause you were curious..but it was still good.

This post has been edited by Blazing Elf: 12 November 2009 - 03:53 PM