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Round Robin by TheWerecat(me) and Sapheragon. Set after the Fall of Galbatorix. Rate Topic: *---- 1 Votes

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Posted 17 November 2009 - 08:56 AM

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Posted 17 November 2009 - 09:11 AM

I have no idea what this means...

But if you plan to write a story together with Sapheragon you better start right away, the mods don't like it when a new topic is opened for an ''upcoming'' story...

May sound interesting if you plan to write a story... May I enquire what it's about apart from being after Galby dies?

Is Round Robin supposed to be the tittle? Sounds kind of strange and kind of different from the Inheritance style...

Anyway, I still have no idea what this topic is supposed to be about...

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Posted 17 November 2009 - 09:19 AM

You do know that setting up a topic with nothing written yet is against the rules?

Now onto the story,

Sapheragon has his own story, and another round robin.

You only just started your own story and now this round robin.

Your story and his story are both set several hundreds of years after the death of Galby (It's becoming a cliché, and one that actually noone likes)

So tell me, how can you make the readers believe that this will be a good story, where you put all of your efforts in?

I did it too, write 2 stories at the same time. It heavily affected the quality of either, and also, I did not manage to put enough time into school because of it.


My suggestion to both of you is that you either give up on both of your own stories, and continue with this, or the other way around. I just cannot see how this and the others will turn into a readable and enjoyable story.
De nacht is foarby, de sinne is frij, omheech te gean, in nije dei.

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Posted 17 November 2009 - 11:14 AM

Closed. Start this when you actually have something to show us. This isn't Geocities.

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