*steals black and white version*
Harharharharhar I will have fun with this
C&C:
version 4, that yellow stream going towards her umm...is a bit...um...weird, stick with version 3. =)
Version 3, Oooohhh pretty. I like it a lot. Hmm...Try changing the color of her arms, so there's a little less yellow, I think normal skin color will fit in this case. Also the green line seems a little out of place as there aren't any other greens of that shade, its too bright.
Version 1 & 2: What are the differences? I don't see any. Hmm... (looks at URL) Ahh...you seem to have posted the same image twice, so version 3 is actually version 2? *nods* I see. A bit boring and not much to crit to be honest, stick with the color.
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EDIT: A few hours later I copied some of your stuff and I give you my versions, I won't use em anywhere but this Beefy, I just wanted to show that I did something with your work. Thanks for the idea and basework (I'll get rid of em, if you think this is like an evil copy infringement, that's fine.):

Lol, not really an infringement. If you want, I'll send you the .xcf, so it'll look better, haha. And thanks for the comment.
