C&C please, I ran out of time, and I'm not sure what to do with the left black side. I'm thinking I might just throw this away, it was a good lighting exercise though.

Throwing it away would probably be best. It's not bad or anything, but it's just way too busy. The colors don't really blend well together and you have a lot of different things going on at once. It would look much better if you hadn't used black in the background.

Yeah, it looks way too busy, there are just too many things happening, too many effects . . . It'd be best just to chuck it, there's way to much done to it to try to redo IMO.

Really? I thought the color part of it was fine...
But yeah, I'll probably just chuck everything, but the render, the only thing I like is the really nice lighting I did (the shadows on her skin did NOT look like that earlier).