Never done anything like this, it's not that great. c & c please.

Ahh, not bad. Though I think it would be better if you darken the lighting a bit. It's just me so you don't have you do it. This is like one of my first c&c on graphics and stuff. It's just a suggestion, not like a demand. I do like it, though, don't get me wrong. It's pretty good .

That's great! I'm glad you started dong this. ^_^


I want to dim the background a little, I just didn't have time.


If anyone else has anything to add, please do so.

I have a question. Is that on NEGATIVE?

You mean a photo negative? No, I just messed with it a lot.

I don't get it. Did you just take a pic and bump up the contrast?

I'm assuming this is part of the design, but the pixelation makes it look pretty bad :\

Yeah. Make it the actual size.

I think it is the actual size, it's just that the contrast is really high. Erona . . .?

I mean, the picture has been upscaled on purpose, and erona should make it proper sig size.

Yeah that's what I think, btw what program do you use, it will help me crit on your stuff.

Whoa, so many questions!

QTR: No, I didn't just do that, I did a lot of things with it.

limes: It is part of the design, I guess it does look pretty crappy.

Palagrin: It is the exact same size as it was before. I didn't have to enlarge it.


QTR: Contrast is high, and some other affects were added.

Palagrin: I'll work on that. I just like making bigger stuff that I can't use.

H.N: Wasn't enlarged, I pixelated it on purpose. I currently cannot convince my dad to download a graphics program or anything, so riht now I'm stuck with Picnik (A photo distortion site.) and paint. Crappy system, I know, but that's all I got at the time.

Argh, silly dad!

You really need to get a better program!

I know, I know. But hey, I'm trying to talk him into giving me email too so....

I did a new version, hopefully this will be better than the first.



I said it's only a tad better, I know it still sucks.

Try adding some background, DARK COLORS. (Like black)

I don't really get it; it's a pic with a ton of effects superapplied to it. Did you intend it to be a sig? I don't know what to crit since I don't know what you want.

I was just bored, and I decided to make that. I wanted to mess with as many tools as I could I guess.

Oh. So what do you want us to crit about?

I really don't know. Can you think of anything I can change about it?

I do not know what you want it to look like. One thing is that the pixelation really does not work.

Ohhhhh, okay. I can fix that.

I changed it more now. Is it better than the last?

By about 1000%


However it still is a bit too hard on the eyes. And you might want to try a black background instead of white. Now its amobebish...

^ Agreed. 1000% better.

It is a bit hard on the eyes, and I think a black background would indeed suit it. You might want to remove the two random spots in the middle.

Seeing as she hasn't got an image editing program yet, erona is going to find it hard to add a black background.

It will take me a while, but I can do it.

Thanks for the crit, I'll make the new version soon.

New version. It was TOOOO hard to do....