Slightly different style, hope you like. C&C please.

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v2



Background pic and bubbles stock by Resurgere.

Awww, he's so cute! *Ahem* Moving on to critique....

I like it a lot, but the line going up from the text is a bit odd. I keep thinking the polar bear is in a cage because of it.

The big bubbles on the right are a little too dark, they stand out too much.

Overall it's really nice though, good job.

I like it since it has polar bears!

Anyway....it's nice, the bubbles on the right are a bit off. Other than that I love it!

I like the first one. And I don't think the font fits very well with the theme of the picture... but over all, I really like it.

My eyes really seem to go right to the bubble things. I know that isn't what you wanted.

V3

The bars of light are either too bright, or go the wrong direction. In the present one, there isn't a defined focal point, since when it might've been the head, the light streaks over it to an undefined area. Maybe if they went the other way, to go over the body of the animal . . .?

Also the color of the bubbles is kinda off, it's a bit too green for the colors of the rest of the sig, so it might look a bit better if you made it more navy-blue and then lightened it.

Like so?

I like the text, the line coming from the "g" is good ^_^.

Print Clearly?

I really like it, but the only problem I see is the line coming from the "g."

The line coming from the "g" is a nice touch, but it seems kinda . . . intrusive? Also maybe you should darken the right side a little, say by a radial gradient?

That dark?

And mtbanger, what did you mean by print clearly?

I was talking about the font, but on second thought, maybe not.

Needed something there.

Hmm in the last one I dont like the lines above its body. Also, given the direction of the light beams, Its face seems to dark. Maybe add glow slightly to the face or change the beam direction?? The beam direction just doesnt match. Its REALLY light on the back when its dark on the front, and yeah, it should be the other way around.
Its a nice idea though, and the colours are really pretty.
Did you use this for a SOTW comp by any chance?? Maybe I'm imagining things....

No..

Yeah, the original one had light on his back, but then QTR said it had nor real focus.

I like this one the best out of all of them, but a couple things bother me. The light on his back is just a tad too bright. (Makes him seem like he's glowing from the inside) And the third ray of light on the right is a bit too bright also.

Like so?

Oooooo, me like.

I just think he needs to be dimmed a bit more, and the weird random lines o the right shouldn't be there.