I think it might be a bit dark, but it's the first time in a while that I've had any inspiration to do anything in The GIMP.
So, what does everyone think?
How can I make it better (Aside from making it lighter, please)

C'mon guys, 65 views, and no one says anything?
is it that bad?

Hmm the right side draws to much attention for me.
BTW what program did you use?

Gimp, should I tone down the C4Ds, a bit?
Or just remove some of the effects over there?

Honestly haven't seen this topic would of posted If I had seen, a good core sig but I just think this style is too monotone, you need to create some better depth of shades, try smudge c4d style.
You've been using the same style for too long imo, switch it up to improve.

Missed you dude you and KG were quite the rivals eh.

Haha, I kinda left when KG lost his internet, he didn't tell me he'd been getting on at his grandmother's house.
What exactly do you mean by smudge C4D Style, I can't say I've ever heard of it.

No, my grandmother was paying the bill "rival". It is that bad lol jk.
You should smudge the c4d a bit, sort of like, mellowing it down by somewhat smearing it out of focus a bit. Or to where the c4d isn't as prominante, sorry for spelling.
I would definately try some coloring, it needs it.

I just did a bit of looking into what Hammy said, but I started a fresh one with it, I think I'm gonna leave this one be, I'll post up the new tag in a few minutes.

Hey get on MSN so I can helpz youz .

I'm still not allowed on MSN, from before...
besides, if you help, it won't feel all mine

I can give tips though, T_T.